Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but average. After hitting someone in his truck, his world was turned upside down, inside out, and more than fifty shades of grey.
Now, he seems to be something called a World Keeper, and must create and manage his own world. Is this his afterlife, or something else entirely?
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I tried read, but I don't see any objective in the history, It's like a Slice of Life of a God, initially you can think is a slice of life of a god in the middle of the mortals, but isn't, the god just keep watching the world and making changes;
And I disliked somethings, first the small 'NTR' like act, well, it's a yuri NTR and the protagonist don't care much;
Second, that god with rage because of the protagonist write her 'heart', personally I think love as much better than make someone 'loyal', when someone is 'loyal' he can give him own life with one word of their 'master', but in the love, if you betray maybe you can get killed in the wrost case, the love it's much more 'permissive' than loyality in my POV, then I don't liked when she say to him that is bad, because to begin, the fact she can became angry with him it's just because he don't make her loyal to he.
Think in this history as the diary of someone playing a type of The Sims but universe-wide
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Love this novel, new take on quite a few things and it's honestly a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!!!
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This is generally a good world building fantasy story but with one glaring flaw that after a good start to the story keeps coming up: Unnecessary / filler style stories. Let me elaborate, often large groups of chapters are devoted to writing a story that is mostly irrelevant to the main story, which on itself is fine, but also does not contain any meaningful character development or set up for future chapters. These kinds of chapters get boring very quickly and I would appreciate it if the writer would ask himself before writing these chapters "Does this (sentence/chapter/story arc) really need to be here, does it add anything to the story?" I understand that sometimes you just have this great idea for a chapter and you really want to use it, but sometimes it just doesn't really add anything that I (and often other people) want to read and we just end up either bored or glossing over it till we find the good parts. So ignoring this flaw I would have rated this as a good (4) story, with this however I have to give it an ok (3) rating although in the latest chapters this problem has gotten less bad so I may update my rating if the story gets significantly better.
Edit: Things got significantly worse at some point but has been getting better so I updated my rating.
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I wont read this anymore hahaha !!!
i was read before and drop now I force read again but same MC is to dump and never learn and he love horse to much like horse is main son and other race is step son why bother make other race if you love horse lol wierd when horse kill midget he say exuse to make them now how to deffen themself but when horse get kill by midget I will desen and kill lot midget to make peace so bullshiiit
I give 3 star for sad story coz is good and for system not for main story with stupid mc
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If you are into world building (literally) this is a good novel for you...
As for me I'm not reading it anymore than than I should.I just don't like the MC and no romantic interaction what soever but overall the novel is good . Recommend to read it 9/10.
This comment will be immature so don't read this I you want
I hate that the MC made most female gods have a romantic interest in him then just let them do whatever they want! (if you are going to make them have a romantic interest in you make a freaking progress) but noooooo the MC didn't he just like "OK the world is patch up and now time to go to sleep again and again and again the loop it back". The way the characters interact with each other are like friends even his love interest are being treated as friends
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The start is kinda iffy.. But after 20-30 chaps it start getting good and after 150 chapters its great xD and Thank you for your hard work
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very good novel nice theme and we can see the character development for the character
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The novel is start with a really good concept, a human that become some sort of existence like God that manage a world.
In my opinion, what attracts me the most is, the moment when you wanted to know what will happen next to the civilizations around the world, the world-building is good.
But, the characters, the MC is absolutely a submissive-dense-beta MC
(submissive to his subordinates, NTR'ed by his own subordinate goddess, can't think with his own brain)
If only the MC character a bit better. A good story but ruined by it's own characters... Sigh, too bad.
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If you want to read a story with a MC that gets walked all over by his companions and gets ntr'd by them then have a go the MC constantly makes Decisions with little to no thought and his goddess and gods are actively not following orders his goddess for humans defies him and even threatened him he has complete and total power over everything and all of them but he consistently is made to look like a bitch and basically is nothing but a bank to buy stuff he makes zero positive impact on the world and the story as a w
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For all those who said there is character development to be expected, there is none. The MC kept making similar mistake, going around trying to find a patch, getting grinded out by the weird line up of "Goddess" and repeat. So many features and connections could have been used to make the story better, however, the author just want to add more stuff and never actually used any of them. Even though most problems could have been easily prevented or patched with just a few usages of what he already had, he still try to add more things to fix the problems and that produce even more problems. It's basically an everlasting cycle of dumb things that the MC do. Can't understand why this got top 1 but any half decent author can do better than this, so much wasted potential.
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