An unfortunate guy found himself stranded inside a forest with a questionable system that turned his gender upside down. He will have to scavenge and survive in this hostile place, meeting many enemies and few friends. He will have to navigate a Cultivation Society that either hates (Kills) or wants to 'contract' Beasts.
Will he find his place in this world or will he become someone's pet? Will his system help him Evolve into Divine Beasts? Or will he change into a Human to explore this world?
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I'm a Novice Writer, my grammar has improved and I'm doing much better, but I still need all your help kind readers to improve my skills~! ^_^
I have searched the web for any image that could properly portray our protagonist while keeping it free. I have found a very nice picture that was close to what I was going for, but it IS AI-generated and I have no idea how copyright works. I do not own that image, I have simply searched for a free picture describing her features and found this... if you are the owner of this picture, please write me a message and I will take it down as soon as possible. (The Image is temporary and I will commission an artist later for a more accurate depiction~)
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Disclaimers:
I'm not a native English speaker, so expect to cringe a lot.
This story will mostly focus on fights, Evolutions, bloodlines, etc.
There will be romance and snu-snu, but don't expect it any time soon. (He is a beast, after all. And I still don't know how to tackle Yuri stuff...)
Don't expect the protagonist to drag his modern knowledge into this world, it will stay somewhat classic Xianxia.
This is/will be a slow story! If you are looking for constant action, you are in the wrong place. There will be action, but not as much as action-only focused stories.
1st. Edit: This story's Main Romance is Yuri only, other characters will get their romance in the background, but won't be much touched upon.
2nd. Edit: Until chapter 10 it will be very chaotic when it comes to the gender bender, after the 10th chapter it's solid, I didn't know how to do this properly since I'm not quite that skilled to make it more appealing.
(Insert something that I forgot, since whenever you start something there is always something you have forgotten...)
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You can read this on RoyalRoad too~ ^_^
And we also got a Discord~! https://discord.gg/F9SbyZbxHY
- Chapter 199 – Grandmaster is being a bother and fun incoming~5 hours ago
- Chapter 198 – Things are moving…Sep 9, 2024
- Chapter 197 – Fun incoming?Sep 8, 2024
- Chapter 196 – Fight, please?Sep 7, 2024
- Chapter 195 – Vicious little girl…Sep 6, 2024
- Chapter 194 – Dragoness~Sep 5, 2024
- Chapter 193 – Challenge for HerbSep 4, 2024
- Chapter 192 – Herb GardenSep 3, 2024
- Chapter 191 – Finally back…Sep 2, 2024
- Chapter 190 – Aiko fixes = Aiko ownsSep 1, 2024
- Chapter 189 – (18+) Aiko is also a pervert?!Aug 31, 2024
- Chapter 188 – (18+) Best torture device!Aug 30, 2024
- Chapter 187 – Treasures… Damn, perverts!Aug 29, 2024
- Chapter 186 – Why is everyone a pervert!?Aug 28, 2024
- Chapter 185 – Genocide 101Aug 27, 2024
- Content Warning
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So, this would be my first review for this site. The author addresses what they believe is wrong with the writing in a later chapter so I won't touch on those problems, instead I will briefly tell others the pros and cons. I will other disclose what generally this novel contains and what people should expect.
Pros:
The main character quickly loses most of what makes their personality so they are essentially a clean slate for most of the books so far. On top of that, most of the story is fluff with fights here and there. Side characters are generally nice and a enjoyable side to read. Cons: Okay, so this novel has a lot of cons and the author is aware of the fact, they have disclosed what they believe is wrong according to comments. I will instead try to focus on other major issues. The beginning chapters of the book are ROUGH. Not only are they a bumbling mess due to the MC but also a mess due to rapid shoving of a different world upon them. The first 30ish chapters could use some editing and adjustment. At points, I was incredibly lost due to telling the audience that something happened. Fights are essentially super basic after chapter 30 due to the power spike, Fights break down to MC too op or MC can't even put up a fight. Everything is shallow:
The MC is a young fox girl for 10 years with almost none of their previous memories up to chapter 186. On top of that, None of the side characters are even remotely fleshed out yet except Mei.
The biggest sin that makes me dislike this novel the most is that the MC is braindead like 90% of the time or getting bent over by the system. So, Should you read?The novel is catering to people who don't like descriptive gore and descriptive content in general. Fights are minimalistic so don't come here for just that. This is no progression fantasy, Sure there is progress and leveling up but the system is so so cluttered and we have zero idea of where the MC stands against most normal people. If you want a non human type novel or nsfw then don't bother because
the MC gets the ability to change into a human eventually and the nsfw content so far is toy play no the MC has not had a s*x nor will in the near future because she is a KID at the age of 10. The author is playing with fire by treading this line where the MC deliberately is aware of s*x and s*xual activity due to fragmented past memory? But won't engage fully but tease and other lewdness. The author has locked themselves out of the main portion of content they can access by starting the MC with almost no memories and as a kid, thus making them functionally a kid but allowing them to engage with kinks and s*xual content at the same time
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So far it has been an enjoyable story. (Edit: I'm at Chapter 42: The story is still going strong & very enjoyable.)
MC learning about the sudden situation change and learning how to survive & level up.
With some interesting interactions with other character, but without the ability to speak yet, but still making friends & allies, while learning from them. Then getting involved with more elements in the new world.
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It is good, with good story and developments. Also has a good bit of fluff, for those who are searching for fluff stories.
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A very interesting story, the interaction with the other characters it's funny and well written, the word is well described and complete.
The sudden reasonable strength gain and the race change in the beginning of the story to me it's vere good, unlike other stories where the protagonist growth is just so slow that we have to wait hundreds of chapters just to heve some minor growth.
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A good fun story with an OP floof MC, that loves floof, and shinies. If you want a fun story this is it.
However the vocabulary and grammar of the story can be quite weak at times, due to the author's status as a non native english speaker. Which is why I am giving the story a 4 stars instead of 5.
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An enjoyable read so far. There are no real issues to write about so I rate it at 5 for now, though I will have to come back and write a more detailed review once the story is further in and the protagonist more developed.
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Nice. Funny and cute MC. A tsundere possible love interest.
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I've been loving this book so far in its journey. If you are interested in a slightly serious story with a healthy dose of fluff I'd suggest giving it a go.
Compared to other cultivation novels I'd say it is the best paced one I've read so far. Also the MC is afraid to get he little paws bloody so that is also a plus.
For those on the edge after chapter 15 is a good spot to tell if you like it or not. It gives a good representation of what type the MC is and how others will mostly interact with her.
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A great series so far. I tend to not read "new/ low chapter" series, as they can get abandoned easily. However this one caught my eye, I decided "why not" and read a few chapters.
I'm glad I did. It's a great start to the story and I can see the author is dedicated to it.
As for the story itself It reminds me a little of the "soul land" series. Mainly with the beasts being hunted, enslaved or killed.
It's refreshing to see a non human story where everyone is not just bff's and get along.
The MC can seem a little stupid and alloof at start, but it makes sense considering they are a cub. I look forward to seeing them grow, and stun even more people.
There is no s*xy times yet, but I'm sure it will come in due time.
I have only read one other "system" story so I can't say if it's better or worse than others. I do like that the system is not just some OP AI, and has it's own faults.
Overall a great read. I'm sure in no time this will be a five hundred chapter long epic tale.
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Its a good story, gets 5 stars for being good and also floof, I love floofy things
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