Well, I am not that good at writing reviews, but I wish to give it a try. First, there were times when I was confused where was reading about the plot of the respective world or you just talked about how his life in that world was, so I suggest working a bit on this. Another thing and this is just a personal wish, is that I would like seeing him meeting again with Cassy. It would make for a good surprise to meet with her again, and I really liked her, even though we only saw her for a few chapters. Other than this, keep up the good work man, this novel has really good potential and I am waiting for the next chapter with my hopes up. :D
Since there are currently only 17 chapters I can't call this a definite rating but it certainly has potential (and do NOT start reading before you've read the synopsis, otherwise you'll only end up confused at the first chapter) the story itself has an interesting premise, the premise is a bit simelar to "the great game", though this story they put less focus on the different lives he's leading, at least uptill now (and yes I know we've only seen one life of the MC in "the great game"). I'm also really looking forward to how it turns out, anyways keep it up author maybe I'll rate 5 stars in the future but for now I'm keeping it a 4.
Well, I am not that good at writing reviews, but I wish to give it a try. First, there were times when I was confused where was reading about the plot of the respective world or you just talked about how his life in that world was, so I suggest working a bit on this. Another thing and this is just a personal wish, is that I would like seeing him meeting again with Cassy. It would make for a good surprise to meet with her again, and I really liked her, even though we only saw her for a few chapters. Other than this, keep up the good work man, this novel has really good potential and I am waiting for the next chapter with my hopes up. :D
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Since there are currently only 17 chapters I can't call this a definite rating but it certainly has potential (and do NOT start reading before you've read the synopsis, otherwise you'll only end up confused at the first chapter) the story itself has an interesting premise, the premise is a bit simelar to "the great game", though this story they put less focus on the different lives he's leading, at least uptill now (and yes I know we've only seen one life of the MC in "the great game"). I'm also really looking forward to how it turns out, anyways keep it up author maybe I'll rate 5 stars in the future but for now I'm keeping it a 4.
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