Interesting story so far, tho the cliffhangers are a little deadly (not a bad thing). Also, the humor here is subtle and if the humor continues from here, I predict it will be some sort of warming therapy for the story (synopsis and the title doesn't hint for a happy story) . Perspective (1st/3rd person) transitions are nice and smooth. I think the world needs more depth and some situations explaining, but then again, it's only seven chapters in.
Interesting story so far, tho the cliffhangers are a little deadly (not a bad thing). Also, the humor here is subtle and if the humor continues from here, I predict it will be some sort of warming therapy for the story (synopsis and the title doesn't hint for a happy story) . Perspective (1st/3rd person) transitions are nice and smooth. I think the world needs more depth and some situations explaining, but then again, it's only seven chapters in.
Satisfying read so far.
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