(edit) This is lacking the tag for fan-fiction. When the most important characters (including MC), many elements, if not the entire world itself, is "borrowed" from other stories. It is fan-fiction. (/Edit)

I got to chapter 14. Then decided to give it two more chapter, to 'explain itself'. Or perhaps rather, make sense.

There are so many unrealistic jumps in logic, even for a Gary stew like this MC and his companions. Mostly, it is what I expected, coming into this story. 

How can a 6 year old, kill a monster with even a kitchen knife. The monster can't be more dangerous than a rat. Nor can it possibly pose a threat to a civilian.

How can someone who is just introduced to the concept of a sling, use it to hit a target the size of a mobile phone, 10 or more meters away (or out of earshot, of two excited 6 year old, trying to stay quiet). Without any practising?

How can a 6 year old produce enough power to kill an ogre (or was it an orc) with a single stone, with said sling?

How can a bow, strung by a 6 year old, using a rope as a string, produce enough force to kill something? 

 Can overlook this and more. But when contradicting the trait, with which a character is identified by. In the name of drama and plot, I stop reading. (Edit) please remove 'genius - protagonist' tag from this story. (/Edit)

Cause such author can write anything. Suddenly, clowns invade the planet, and murder MC's parents, to create a revenge arch. But he is saved by the monster hiding under his bed. The monster is an angel, that raises his parents as undead, to fight for MC. Just to add some parent-child slice of life drama.

On top, the author apparently borrow most of the world, and characters from other stories. OK. But then skip any explanation for anything. Expecting the reader to already be familiar enough with all these, to recognise and understand the world.

Skipping several years all of a sudden. But not equally advancing circumstances. Only plot relevant things are advanced. Everything else is static. Even between nations it seems. Even though major diplomatic development was discovered by MC. 

The discovery of 80 local dungeons has done nothing to the amount of adventurers at the local branch. Nor brought wealth to the area, or even the MC or his companion.

How the most character contradicting chapters get 32 likes, I don't know. But to each their own.

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I have tried reading the story based on good reviews but this is illogical, rushed and annoying. It had the potential but is something mediocre at best for those who enjoy this type of story. 

I won't list everything but here are few things which I found really strange:

• Barely any progress during time skips across many different aspects
• Things which happened very early on do not seem like something that would occur in the world
• MC not taking any actions over the 5+ years to deal with the issues/possible issues
• Too many skips including some of the important things which I would expect to be part of the story and not time skip with barely even mentioning them 

I tried pushing through the beginning as I thought it would get better but after reading few chapters in capital, I gave up. 

The story annoys more than it entertains. 

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The author seems to understand what cliches are, without actually knowing how to make them fit making everything feel convoluted.

To the point someone who is being made the representative of the crown, a renowned engineer being the only person to fix some of the vital weapons for the nation, wasn't able to prevent an illegal auction and instead had to dive into one of the most dangerous battlegrounds which hadn't been cleared in thousands of years because the crown wasn't able to stop a single auction for their upcoming prodigy that they don't want fleeing the country and vocally said as much in his presence.

I plan to read more, hoping that the IQ of the supporting cast can improve, but you might do better skipping the first 25 chapters or so for a better opinion of the novel.

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Omg I can't believe it, this story had so much potential but getting to chapter 14 it's the most contrived, illogical bs ever. 

Nothing makes sense, them not having money, the slavery thing, the fact that the entire territory is doomed because the stepmother.... something? I still don't understand why she's seemingly able to do whatever she wants. 

I feel bloody betrayed as a reader that the author expects people to just swallow this illogical garbage. I'm so disappointed.

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Genius tag its a lie. The MC, was a morom before, and after he got his wishes he is still a moron. So the world is dumbed down to compensate.  Most if the world feels flat, no development outside being amazed at evey gesture the MC makes, outside of the main  FL interests. Even them are dumbed down, especially Angelica, a very very inteligent woman in og story, and olivia, a inteligent woman, but also a powrless one. No saintess power for her. The MC, is an arogant teenager who acts almost like  a chinese  MC, whitout the cunning to back it up. I am done

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Less than 15 chapters and the author managed to butcher a pre-made story (since he barely put anything original on it) and ruin even what should't be possible. Seriously, did this guy gets a hard on for the most ret*rded and hated cliches being distorted into even worst things?

The MC is put as a genius, but as always, if the author cannot back his 'genius MC', the world must become dumb to compensate it. The supposed genius with modern earth knowledge, cheat learning/dev./eng. skills can't afforc to think even a single way of safely make money in more than 12 years even though he can kill monsters and repair ancient (read as rare and f*cking futuristic stuff) weaponized relics... yet, his money only comes from monsters and dungeons.

The already hateful 'common sense' of the initial fic world was distorted to a absurd level, only to fit the supposed 'genius' MC's ascension.

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I might be biased but this authors stories are always on point for me. including this one. a mash of many universes done well. I can overlook stuff like excessive girl catching. I dont mind it. Grammar is good relative to other fanfic writers but its the unique way of approaching an over saturated genre that I really appreciate. and overall I like the formula used for creating this and his other stories. I appreciate not trying to drown people in despair. I like heroes who kill. and im bored of self indulgent, morally neutral MCs who folk designate as an anti-hero even tho thats not what anti hero means... anyways off topic. Great story so far. keep it up. 

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A good novel deserves more reviews. I shall attempt to do it justice.

It's a start weve seen before a guy dies, a bored god offers a reincarnation and the guy requests his favourite novel universe to be the destination. The god being capricious states thats too boring so how about mixing in some other IP's to spice things up?

What follows is out protagonist taking the role of Leon Fau Bartfort from the world of otome games is tough for mobs. Only his new universe is literally dripping in the trappings of other popular series. His childhood friend? Everyone's favourite slave demi human! Loot from his first dungeon? A full set of fallout power armor! 

What follows is an incredibly engaging story as our MC navigates the world hes in and accumulates powers and artifacts from a host of other ip's as he builds his force. 

Lots of fun and somemtruly satisfying revenge moments for those who loved the original story. If you are a fan of tough for mobs you will enjoy this. Give it a shot and thank me later.

This story has legs and will only ever be limited by the authors imagination which so far seems to be pretty damn good!

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Overall The story is good if you can get passed the start. As that's more of a niche setting, then most people will enjoy 

Probably did too much in skyrim for not enough out of it 

Overall I think integration between the different space, faring civilizations is good 

Thank you author for putting your time into writing it 🖖

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