By chapter 4 I feel it's slowly being thrown out the window, I can see the soul that was breathed into the characters dying in front of me to be replaced by the cesspool that is a poorly written harem, a trophy case of women that the author likes and wants to display.

I left it as 4* because of how well that first chapter was written but I'm disappointed in the direction this went

My suggestion is to pull away from the harem/romance and use that bright eyed child's enthusiasm to fight crime and show his joy at living his best life... he's 15 he doesn't need a harem

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Psy0

Status: c19

Aug 2, 2024

This novel is a breathe of fresh air. Unlike other fanfics that have murderous hobos and egotistical MCs, the MC in this novel is generally very polite. He represents the epitome of Japanese courtesy and politeness. You can feel the stories and situations around the MC changed for the better just from the way he acts and treats others with respect. The greatest weapon that Kamen Rider possess is the power to embarrass you to death. The Cringe is so excessive it's funny and endearing and will likely cause social death.

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AGENT03

Status: chapter 19

May 11, 2024

So far so good!!! I like it???

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ieatwood

Status: chapter 13

May 5, 2024

A pretty good read. Some small nitpicks here and there but overall really good. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

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HideThisSpace

Status: chapter 90

Aug 28, 2024

i never really saw kamen rider, but you made me want to watch all the series. I just love how you wrote the MC and I loved the fic as a whole. Thank you so much for writing this. (And as you can tell I don't know how to give a good review but I tried)

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