Synopsis: At the center of the cosmos lies a world, the very first world to ever exsist. The most precious treasure in all of existence with countless lifeforms and seemingly an endless amounts of hidden treasures and creations. The gods and immortals waged an endless war for it, vying to be the first one to arrive and claim dominion over the world before anyone else. Countless gods and creatures have their remains scattered amongst the starways after millions and millions of years of combat and slaughter. In the end, an alliance was formed by the twelve strongest gods and immortals and their respective factions and together they found and breached the starway leading to the first world. There was no way for the inhabitants to resist the twelve mighty gods and their forces as they swept over the world like locust. Only the mighty guardians had a chance to resist, but they were outnumbered and outmatched and swiftly defeated. With the guardians defeated, a new age had begun for the first time ever in this world. An age of gods, immortals and monsters.

Alternative Synopsis: Strewn across the battlefield lies hills of broken bodies as the blood formed rivers and lakes. The sky still carried scars as blood rained from the heavens. Only one man was standing on the fields of slaughter. In the past, the man had been a gentle and caring soul. But on this land it would only get him and those he cared about killed. Who was to blame for all this injustice? Who was to blame for all the opression? Who was to blame for everything wrong with the world. As he cast his gaze to the skies, his eyes bloodshot with rage, he found the targets of his obsession. The gods! Everything was their fault!! The man howled as he took off into the skies looking like a streak of bloody red light, shattering the entire battlefield underneath his mighty step, creating a whirlwind of blood and broken bodies in his wake. This was his story, this was his revenge!

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Hello everyone! I want to present a story I was writing a while back. I didn't get a writers block or any of the kind preventing me from finishing the story. I ended up getting no reliable feedback about my writing from those I sent it to. What I need to continue is feedback about my writing, examples such as: How my grammar is, am I describing things enough in detail or maybe too much? Are the characters likable, funny or realistic. Well, basically, I wanted to know if my way of writing was good enough to continue in that style. At first I started off web-novel style (the prologue). After which I changed it as I got more and more into writing, in the end, I think I adopted a more "book" type of writing style. But no feedback about this left me confused about how I should have continued writing... if anyone reads this story, please throw all kinds of feedback you can at me so that I could pick this up again.