I felt like it was a pretty good story, up until the point he came to Hogwarts and in his first class went: "You speak when spoken to!" and "You pathetic pigs can't fight to save your life". And then everyone was like: "Harder, daddy!" and "Oh my god, he's so handsome!" 

Not quoting, but close enough.

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The writing felt all sorts of annoying and stilted.

There was quite a few times were I felt the writer knew less about the hp universe than me. The MC definitely knows less.

He's done some silly and self endangering things. Then pats himself on the back like he's smart. The author, at least, is sometimes the person to point out how stupid the MC can act.

It is really missing the chaos and belligerence that I would expect in a school, especially towards a young teacher. Also the acceptance and happy adaptability that hogwarts is going through is an outlier. I expected a more outspoken reluctance towards combat or Slytherins trying to act way more chummy and "in the know" then they currently are.

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Promising start and I quite like him beeing allready an adult and not having to reread the book story from a student perspective. I am really looking forward to how this story will unfold and how the Main Character as a Dark Arts User will change the story Progression. 

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This book is amazing. A dark-magic centered MC who actually has a goal with real consequences is almost non-existent. The premise of this book is very interesting, and thats not even counting the actual writing. The writing is done very well, could be better, but still good. The characters are deeply fleshed out, and the plot is neither stilted nor rushed. If you're looking for an HP fanfic different from the norm, then this one is a great choice.

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Enjoyable read! A fresh perspective for HP fan-fiction which establishes itself quite well. Characters, plots, dialogue, and writing all work in the stories favor. I like it :)

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Good point to review the story as it just finished HP book 1.

Interesting fanfic, I do enjoy the sections where the main character is actually a teacher and I look forward to how he can survive the curse of the Teacher in the Defense Against Dark Arts class.

The story closely follows the original and I honestly enjoy the idea that the story will always follow that original main plot in some fashion.

I like how the character is actually written at times implimenting unique things that showcase his intelligence rather than handwaving it.

Best of all the MC is not a weirdo pedo with a harem of children which happens a lot in fanfics.

Now for the bad, not to much here just at some points the point of view change it kinda hard to pinpoint.

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