The highlight of this story, for me, is definitely the magic system. It feels logical, organic, and ominous, with a strong emphasis on the dangers of using what seems to be an intense force of nature. The system of runes feels rich and well thought out; it's clear the author invested considerable time into its creation.I've never read a story where an established, developed character is reincarnated as a baby. It’s fascinating to see how she grows up and explores her abilities. The reactions of the adults around her add a touch of realism, as they’re astonished to witness a baby doing things she shouldn’t be capable of.

Well done!

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So far it is great! I like how you use professional words and not some random gibberish ones, it shows your experience on reading several novels and integrating the knowledge you've gathered in your own story. 

world building so far isn't that broad since it's still on its early phase, but I can see a clear path. Characters are above average in terms of character designs, they look promising.

I suggest to add in-depth character interactions, and clean your chapters (by simply adding indentions) and you can also add in-depth description on the sceneries (to let your readers broaden their imagination about the place)

You deserve the rating, in my personal opinion your wordplay was far better than mine, keep it up!

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The story is fairly new and until now very interesting. 

It has vivid world building and is very descriptive. Which I personally adore, but ocassionally it is a lot to take in of one does not like it.

The concept is interesting, especially with the rune-based magic which I cannot remember having seen very often nor so we'll planned out.

Each character has their weaknesses and strengths something which is very refreshing to read. Each and everyone has until now solid reasons and believes they follow. 

In summary. It is a story which is very interesting to read until now and has a lot of intriguing directions where it may go. 

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Well, nothing much to write yet. Good start, reincarnation in the same world is a fresh alternative to common isekais. Magic system based on runes - I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. If the rune explanation in chapter "first try" is important I would recomment putting it in a seperate chapter later on with magic system explanations or else one would not probably find them.

Do I have something negative to say... Not really. Oh, maybe don't play the harem card too hard, I've seen promising ideas drifting too much into this genre so that three out of four chapters were related to harem only - which I find sad. Furthermore, you will probably have to think about magic storage or what fuels magic. There are different routes for this:- ambient mana: mana is present everywhere, just influencing it (partially clashes with exhaustion effect of chapter "first try") - internal mana/magic: I've seen different things from cirlces around heart to bloodstream to mana organ to generally mana brain/heart.

Pick your poison, not picking at all may influence the magic system too as you may produce inconsistencies (in case you care). Well, nvm me do your own thing ;-)

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