The only good thing about this novel is an OP MC (allegedly), though that claim is unproven so far, and the promise of smut, which hasn't been featured yet. Furthermore, the longer the story goes the worse it becomes.

• Grammar: 2/5 – Quite a lot of grammatically incorrect constructs, or sentences that convey outright wrong meaning. It's clear that english is not author's first language. At least the author uses a text editor with a dictionary support.
• Writing style: 2/5 – There are a few good elements in the writing, but overall it's just on the bad side. Feels a bit similar to a subpar translation of a chinese webnovel.
• Characters: 1/5 – The characters that author focuses on have a smidge of individuality, perhaps even personality, but others feel like cutout props that are only used to try and highlight MC's supposed awesomeness. In general, the characters are trash tier.
• World building: 3/5 – Slightly interesting idea, but the execution is somewhat flawed and has some holes in it. This doesn't help with maintaining the suspension of disbelief.

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