This story is... painful, and not in a good way.

First, there are a lot of POVs, but they’re handled poorly. Too many characters are introduced too quickly, with perspectives switching between them. And it’s not even the main cast—it's mostly secondary characters who only appear to introduce a location and then vanish.

Second, for those who’ve read Bofuri, this might sound familiar, but if you haven’t, here’s a heads-up: the main character is extremely naïve, to the point of having the mentality of a 4-year-old, relying on others around her to avoid being deceived.

Granted, her high stats mean being tricked won’t harm her, but it’s still painfully frustrating to read.

Third, the main and side characters’ behavior is so over-the-top that most of their actions seem (and often are) completely irrational or thoughtless.

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Interesting story with a nice twist on Bofuri's cheery attitude. Introduces things fairly naturally, although some points may feel forgotten. Like for example 

The writing has massively improved from the first few chapters, with what used to be barebones descriptions now being incredibly immersive and detailed.

The who what and when of 

Ignoring that, definitely an interesting read, and a good way to pass the time.

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I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews so I figured I'd post one. The writing is good, grammar is decent and the story is just fun. I don't really have a lot to critique in the negatives other than the chapters feel short but that's the sign of good writing when you read something and crave more. As of writing this review I give it 5/5 stars and I hope to see future updates.

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