It's a decent read, so give it a chance.

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So here my 2 cents on this story. In the beginning the chapters had a decent length to them and felt well paced but then the chapters took a very sharp decrease in length which in turn trough of the nice pace the beginning chapters had. It feels like we should be in the late 30s in chapters at most instead of at 71. My suggestion would be to set a word count and try to get chapters in that range. The combined chapeters should just be put under as one chapter for a start. I also feel the the MC should have asked way more questions about skills and it also seems pointless that he kept all those skill points just to spread them out like he did. I thought he was going to pick a few skills and pump them up as why else stock pile them? Any way, its an enjoyable read and I would would recommend anyone  to give it a try.

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a mix of fast-paced and slow-paced writing blended together with the unique choice of setting, love it

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A comedic take on an isekai+gamesystem+xianxia story which stops just shy of parody.  Well writen, and interesting.  I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here.

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