Well, I think it's time that I write a review.

After reading to the 25th chapter, I can safely say that I've enjoyed my journey so far. As I have not yet caught up to the current chapter, this review is certainly not set in stone, but I'd like to think that my review wont change much.

First of all, this is a very different story from what you'd usually find on this website. It doesn't seem to be a power fantasy, nor a wish-fulfillment novel. It's different, and certainly in a good way. The story itself has a very intriguing and interesting concept, which is very in depth and seems to be well thought-out.

The grammar and writing style is very good as well. There are the occasional errors, but if pointed out, the author seems to try to fix it as soon as possible. There is nothing in this story that makes it unreadable, as far as I could tell.

The characters in this story are many, and while that may get confusing and convoluted in the beginning, it begins to clear up as the story progresses. I would say that this applies to the story as a whole, as well.

The author seems to really enjoy writing this story and interacting with their readers, as well, which is very nice to see. From my experience, any questions I had were answered by the author in short notice, which shows that this story is indeed well thought out and cared for.

In conclusion, give this story a read. It's pretty good.

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I might be too harsh, but this series is hard to read. It is unique and interesting, but I just can't, man. It's too hard to understand what the f**k is going on half the time I'm reading. The main issues are the infodump and the weirdly stiff grammar.

There's a lot of infodump on some chapters that you'll mostly forget. That leads to you being even more confused on later chapters when they bring up the previously mentioned stuff from the infodump. That makes it too hard to understand for a casual reader. In order to even feel immersed in the story, you'd have to revisit past chapters a lot, and by a lot, I mean a f**kton.

Now for the stiff grammar. Everybody in this series talks as if they are elite scholars or stereotypical british people from movies. I might be exaggerating, but the narration feels a lot like it's straight out of a bible. Hell, some of the dialogues feel so unnatural that it's like reading the script of a school play.

And that's pretty much it. Other than those two things, there's nothing inherently bad about this series.

(Kind of unrelated, but even the author himself commented that it was confusing to read. That is ridiculous, since he's the author of his own story. If the author himself is confused about his own work, then the readers are even worse.

P.s. If the said comment is nowhere to be seen, then it might've been deleted, and this review is the only proof to it even existing.)

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