After the Voidfather’s death, the world is in shambles, the strongest beings all dead as Fragments and Husks, creatures let out from tears in reality, roam the land with impunity. Traveling beyond a city’s walls is always a perilous prospect, and few dare venture into the infested ruins of civilizations that died a century ago.
Aurora—an adolescent kitsune—is at last undergoing her attuning, and if she doesn’t die during the process, she’ll gain access to magic! But things go horribly awry during the process, leaving Aurora stranded far from home with an attunement she never asked for in her hands, all but exiled from the place she’d spent her entire life thus far.
Note: This is (the second iteration of) my first attempt at writing a story, and I greatly appreciate any suggestions, feedback, or constructive criticism you might have. I can’t guarantee a consistent upload schedule, and chapters will come when they come, I suppose!
It's difficult to rate with only 15 chapters, but I wanted to give one.
Little excessive wording - The classes and thoughts on them is the only part I skimmed.
The writing is best described as smooth - some of my favorite on the site.
The story is nice - The setting isn't peaceful, but at no point does it rush things.
The two characters we have so far don't feel 2d or static, though I cant say about future encounters.
Lastly, the pacing is nice: not fast, yet not slice-of-life slow either.
For now, I'm keeping the rating at a five.
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