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Schedule: 3 - 4 chapters per week.
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Synopsis below:
The world of HP is not limited to Britain, it is much wider and deeper than shown in the film. Our contemporary begins his way from Japan, as a hostage of the clan, with its national characteristics of life and magic, because magical creatures include not only goblins, but also tanuki, kitsune, etc. Our hero has to go a long way to personal power, visiting various countries such as America and Russia, immersing yourself in their culture and mysterious magical world.
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Romantic relationships will appear in the work by about chapter 70-90, the harem will be forced for political reasons rather than the whim of the protagonist, and there will be no description of sex.
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Tags: Romance; harem; weaktostrong; adventure; transmigration; r18; harrypotter; magic; wizards; rarebloodline
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1-Nice idea yet bad execution, almost unreadable writing with little explanation
2-MC choices and behavior are highly frustrating and questionable
2/5 READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
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Great idea, really enjoying the different perspective on magic and on top of that he has to learn it covertly, gives a different feel than most stories.
You need to fix the spelling mistakes and grammar. You should break your paragraphs up more, whenever there is a thought process shift is a good place to start breaking them up. I would also recommend you download Grammarly or another autocorrect software to help. You should also look for a text-to-speech website (I use naturalreaders) to listen to it because it's easier to hear mistakes and polish it even further. Really interesting story so far but please fix the grammar.
You should go through and heavily rewrite the first chapter, it definitely has the most spelling mistakes and is a little unclear on how he really shifted realities. Great story so far, really excited to see where it goes.
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Harry Potter world that feels fresh, full of intrigues and politics. The story is not perfect though.
In my opinion the novel drops in quality by a lot when MC starts freely traveling the world. Then another drop for the worse with an introduction of the magic school arc. Simply put, implementing modern day tech in fantasy novels always feels 'meh' to me. Seems like there's no roadmap or planning put in place anymore... the plot/pacing hit rock bottom, whereas harem has become too over abundant to my taste.
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