As it only has 5 chap as I am writting this, this review is rather base on the old draft of this story and my take on it. 

For the introdution of the MC and the way they got reincarnated, I think the old one did it fine. Not ground breaking but good enough so the reader get the gist of things. 

Overall, good story. Good character with an interesting way to introduce them. MC is sorta dumb in the old version, (im hoping that Zin make a development on that part now that they had a chance to rewrite this)

That being said, there also exist some anime trope that also think that could use a change. 

So far, I like the pacing. It doesn't suffer the same issue it has in the old version as the story is too fast at some point. Now every thing is going at normal pace. 

Looking back, the interaction of character is kinda short for some character. Now here, author does make a longer conversation which in my opinion makes a better connection for the MC to everyone else. 

And that's all I can compliment or complain as of the time. Now write more for me Zinless, or I will write my own MC with mutiple bodies story. 

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