*** Contain depiction of extreme cruelty and Smut elements that shouldn't happen or be related to the real world.***
Supposedly, I am the epitome of virtue. My parents were incredibly proud of me; my husband even boasted about how perfect I was as a wife. My offspring raised my social standing. After my death, God appeared to me.
According to the Creator, "The vessel of your soul was overflowing with good karma."
His bold statement read, "You can be anything."
Considering that all I ever desired was to be a man, why did I mutate into an untamed animal?
To top it all off, I am not even a man. I am an entity that possesses both organs.
Very well. If that were the only problem, I could understand.
Why even bother with so much good karma when I have to put in so much effort to rise in the strength hierarchy, and half the population is out to get me?
Witness Hilda's ascent from humble beginnings as a hyena to her rightful place as ruler of a godless world as she ascends the steps littered with the dead bodies of her friends and foes.
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Genre: Kingdom building+ Gore+ Smut.
*Chapter size: 2000+
** Schedule: 1 chapter/day (July)
*** Acess to 10 advanced chapters on my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/huaichi
Disclaimer: The title and synopsis describe the story. If that's what you're into, go for it. I am not into smut in general, much less whatever this is. I read this because I heard the author got a 1 star and ranted about it on the forums, so I felt like ruining my day and making me want to bleach my eyes because it can't get worse.
Rating: 3.5 stars --> rounded up to 4 stars.
The story has a fairly brisk pace. It feels like yk, smut rules, where the story moves along simply because the author has a goal and wants to reach that goal, as a lot of the important parts in the story I would say are just told through dialogue and there's not much introspective reflecting or descriptions of what the characters are doing/thinking/feeling. Like yk, if you've ever read p*rn story or whatever you'd realize a lot of the situations are practically impossible irl and only occur because it's porn. Same thing.
For instance,
The main character wants to have respect in their life. So they want to be a man. But since that isn't possible, they want to have a penis. And since according to the gods, that isn't possible unless they reincarnate like 10 times, the main character accepts. They don't really think about it, except for that they want a "cheat" ability. So not much is really told about the main character in chapter 1 other than what is known in the synopsis. And the actions of the characters are not really commented on, or their descriptions, other than through dialogue. No remarks after the main character leaves, from the gods. Chapter 1 is not so much a backstory as it is a transition.
why did I read this I need to go bleach my eyes.
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