I stopped at Chapter 30. Plot pacing is too quick, the story jumps from one plot arc to another wrapping them up to fast and all the arcs are fairly simplistic in nature; Guy meets girl, finds out the girl’s problem, fixes girl problem and now she is in love with him. The grammar and writing itself makes it readable, which is a definite plus. Author might just need to do MORE with his plots then A+B+C, Okay the chapter is done onto another plot and girl.

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I understand that this work is just an author's attempt at writting japanese-style fantasy but I fail to see how it maintains such a high rating despite the story being completly illogical with zero pretext and cohesion. Honestly the only dubious plus I can spot in here is the read being easy on the eyes due to it's simplicity. Just a friendly advice, though, consider if this work is worth the time you'll spend reading it.

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AUthor needs to improve his background settings, the personalities of the characters and his lore of the world to make it a lot better. Improve the relationship and ambition of the MC, he wants a harem, so he needs to be able to get them all together in 1 bed at the same time otherwise his harem is a pipedream. Just having girls like you is not harem, choosing 1 of them is not a harem, he must choose them all but he lacks ambition.

Grammar is average, its not bad but its not awesome either, just ok.

This novel also needs to have the correspondings tags added and select if this novel has Gore, s*xual Content or Strong Language. I ask this due to the complete lack of tags, this makes me wonder if the author also didnt bother to select these 3 or not. A reader can trust that this for example dosnt has gore and its a fluffy adventure only to find out that it has but author didnt bother to select it.

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Keep up the good Writing hope it turns into a true harem.

that goes the polygamy route

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I like this kind of isekai I just hope the romance is decided.

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