It's... a frustrating read for me.

There is a lot of great worldbuilding here, most of the characters are reasonably well fleshed out, some more than others.

The grammar is also good.

But I have some gripes with the story

The writing styles reads quite monotone, as it's very "tell, don't show". Many very important conversations are merely described briefly. We see no back and forth in these, what I am assuming, emotional moments. Just a paragraph saying they talked about X subject then moving on.

Also not a fan of how we are told the MC has the instincts of a s*x crazed species... and is instead just a bit hornier than the average human. It's never shown. It's quite frequently just no mentioned how much she is suffering. The only assumption I can make is:

I'm not even asking for smut. It just feels like an almost unimportant aspect of her character. Told one thing and shown another.

The action scene I read most recently was well done though, thoroughly entertaining and there was one chapter which I thought delightfully funny.

That being said, I don't think I will continue reading. Mostly deliberating whether I should give this a 2 or 3 star.

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The premise seems cool at first. But the story doesn’t go anywhere. About 90% is a mix of slice of life, introducing new characters that don’t add anything to the story and a information about which girl is horny and/or attracted to which other girl.

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