This story has good potential, spice and dice everything nice. ~~~ From Chapter One, I was hooked. The story flows effortlessly, and before I knew it, I had reached the end of Chapter 21. The narrative is smooth, the characters are well-developed, and the pacing is perfect. It's a captivating read that makes time fly by. Highly recommended! 

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I like this story quite a lot. While I am usually not the biggest fan of overpowered MCs in stories, this one skillfully avoids all the usual pitfalls. While the MC is extremely talented, being considered almost Jonin level of strength at 8 years old, it still fits within the context of the world, considering the existence of ridiculous prodigies like Kakashi and Itachi. Combine this with his mixed Senju and Uchiha heritage, and it just makes sense. The author also does a great job at making this strength feel earned, given that he trains like an absolute maniac, and allowing us to follow his progression every step of the way. Most importantly, though, is the existence of Yomi. I am a sadly rare breed of person that appreciates it when a main character has other people that can keep up with them in strength. It is boring and unfulfilling for me when the main character is in a league of their own without any peers, and anyone emotionally close to them ends up being relegated to little more than a redundant tagalong who can barely contribute more than showing how amazing and powerful the MC is, yet it seems like everyone and their mother churns out those types of stories on an industrial scale. This is NOT like those stories, for you see, Yomi is ALSO a genius. Albeit, she is held back by not having a basically ninja Jesus level bloodline like the reunion of Uchiha and Senju, and not being reincarnated, so she still is worse than the main character in basically every way, but the fact that she can be compared to him at all despite lacking those overwhelming advantages is incredible in its own right and I appreciate it immensely. I really hope the author can give her her own niche where she truly excels and even surpasses the protagonist, because that would give them a more balanced dynamic that I feel would work splendidly. Having someone you can truly depend on to have your back can work wonders, after all. I haven’t even mentioned the characterization, which is very solid, but this review has been going on long enough so I’ll leave it at that. I give this story a resounding recommendation!

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A pretty good story, I've been enjoying the training montages a lot and the plot seems to be advancing at a decent pace. I don't have any real complaints in 56 chapters and am looking forward to seeing how the story develops.

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I'm greatly enjoying this novel so far. Its funny how jealous the clan kids got of the mc's talent.

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Seriously one of the best Naruto Fan fics easy 5/5 for me. 

Most of them dont bother changing things in the story like the Uchiha massacre. This one does and in a way that actually makes sense which was very refreshing. 

There are some info dumps early on that are boring but I just skipped them personally and im glad I kept reading as the start gets much better in later chapters.

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The writting so far is pretty pleasant, the main MC so far seems alright, and his conversations with his friend are quite cute, honestly I have nothing to add negative so far either. Overall enjoyable read.

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No romance tag, but there's a tension perhaps romantic subplot.

And the way the romantic subplot was done was wayyy to cringy 

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Hello this story is actually very good for a fan fiction, I have read the manga and have seen the entire anime series. I am writing this review to tell anyone that reads it will not regret it, or I hope they don’t because the author/writer is taking a wonderful slow approach to it. So give it a try might be a little slow  paced but it has a lot of detail and great character development. 

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