I want to like it but at this point I give up. The plot is fine, the smut is fine, calling it "romance" a stretch and the fights are imo too long. But the constant mistakes are harming this novel greatly. They are small but they keep happening leading to nothing but frustration. 

Few examples:

MC locks door, 5 minutes later someone enters through said door.

Eye colour/hair colour description changes, sometimes within the same chapter.

MC using skills he doesn't have.

MC buying a skill then next chapter buys items that do the same, no further mention of the skill.

Gives a command to his army, army leaves, two sentences later repeats the same command in different words, army leaves.

etc. Etc. 

If it was rarely happening it would be a lot more tolerable. But once every two chapters you'll have someone in the comments pointing out blatant mistakes. Decent novel but I got fed up and decided to just read something else.

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