Total Views (All): | 89,494 |
---|---|
Total Views (Chapters): | 60,446 |
Average Views: | 426 |
Word Count: | 361,534 |
Average Words: | 2,546 |
Pages: | 1,315 |
Member | Status | Activity |
---|---|---|
49 / 142 | 8 mins ago | |
13 / 142 | 4 hours ago | |
88 / 142 | 7 hours ago | |
142 / 142 | 7 hours ago | |
2 / 142 | 18 hours ago | |
1 / 142 | 23 hours ago | |
1 / 142 | 23 hours ago | |
2 / 142 | 24 hours ago | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
142 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 | |
1 / 142 | Feb 6, 2025 |
Story
Annabelle's Bastion is still in its kind of early stages but what's been released so far has been great. Some setup has been done for some races, organizations and factions, enough to make the world feel larger and give the reader a general understanding of where the various groups stand but nothing too in depth yet.
The story begins with a somehow basic magic school premise where the main character Annabelle (and reader) is introduced to the basics of the world and power system. The author makes sure that things don't get repetitive/ predictable with the magic school / lessons.
The main character has some clearly defined goals and there's enough mystery to keep the reader invested in what comes next.
The power/ magic system of the book is interesting and has been pretty well explored so far. It's easy to understand with some defined limits but still a lot of potential for interesting things.
Character
The MC Annabelle is great so far. She's kind but isn't a pushover, has interesting dynamics and interaction with the other characters especially Aria and
Anavel
Aria is the main supporting character and
love interest?
The other supporting characters are good enough
especially Anavel
Style
Writing flows well and is easy to understand.
Grammar
Grammar is good. No major errors and I don't remember any typos.
Overall, I've been enjoying this story so far and I'd recommend other readers try it out.
Read More