By FieryKathy
Thanks to a birthday gift from her loving sister, this trans girl is set on an adventure of self-discovery, exploration and love! The story may or may not include catgirls, deities and Full-dive VRMMO’s. :p I am bad at writing story descript
Story could be better, and the grammar isn't the best. I enjoy this story and I hope that it will get even better in the future!
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This is my first review so it wouldn't be the best or anything but I will try.
The starting chapters were really good, her being OP and all but somewhere I felt it missed some elements necessary for a five star review. Grammar isn't that good but it's fine if you want to read the story. Like, minor mistakes are inevitable.
The part where It cringed me a bit was where she started masturbating and I was like, "Am I reading the same novel?" But I won't lie that it was still reasonable considering the warnings and I quite liked it to be honest. (Don't judge me) (
Also, releasing is a bit slow. I wished if it released a bit faster than it actually did. Especially, world building is essential and
The story directly introduces God Realm cannons without giving types of cannons.
so yeah, that's my opinion and review, so far of the novel
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