Name: Valaria "Vale" Lockheart
Race: Three-Tailed Kitsune (One-Tailed Fire Saintess, One-Tailed Water Saintess, One-Tailed Wood Saintess)
Height: 1.52 Meters (5' ft) / 1.82 Meters (6' Ft)
Age: 18
Physique: Primordial Empress Body (Post-Mortal (100%))
Spiritual Root: Heavenly Ten Element Revolving Spiritual Root
Realm: Qi-Gathering (Stage 9/9)
Qi pool: 100%/100%
Survival Level: 25
Stats:
STR: 250 (Limit) + 1000 (Post-Mortal)
END: 250 (Limit) + 1000 (Post-Mortal)
AGI: 250 (Limit) + 1000 (Post-Mortal)
INT: 250 (Limit)
SEN: 250 (Limit)
ENE: 250 (Limit)
Traits:
[Genius Mind: With an intellect nearing the limits of the mortal world, you can learn any information with relative ease. Increases (INT) to a minimum of 9 (Mortal level).]
[Martial and Qi Origin: You can create new techniques, martial arts, and even completely new cultivation methods with relative ease. Increases (ENE) to a minimum of 9 (Mortal level).]
[Evolving Bloodline: You are the start of your own bloodline, which will evolve with you and grow more powerful while you gain new traits as you grow stronger. All those that share your bloodline will be able to have up to (3) Tails. It will also be easier for those of your bloodline to become a Saintess Kitsune of three elements. You Receive a bloodline superiority over those without a bloodline. You Receive a bloodline superiority over those with a weak bloodline.]
[Body Blessed by Virgo: Your body naturally seeks to be in its cleanest state. This might, however, cause you to have a slight amount of obsessive-compulsive disorder when it comes to keeping things clean, on top of a slight perfectionist mindset.]
[Retractable Claws: The natural physical weapon of many beast or beast-adjacent species.]
[Enhanced Lowlight Vision: You can naturally see in places with minimal light as if it were as bright as under noonday sun.]
[Enhanced Elemental Compatibility: Since your race is already one of the beloved children of the elements and you have even greater compatibility than your kin, the elements may randomly decide to help you out in whatever way they decide.]
[Natural Hunter: The hunt is engrained into your blood. You will always be quieter and more careful with your movements, even when you are not trying to. You are always moving in a form of stealth.]
[Attuned Body: Your entire body has been engraved and attuned with all types of Qi and World Concepts. Greatly Enhances Qi gathering speed and law comprehension.]
Blessing's:
[Champion of Elinaria]
[Minor Blessing of Haruka]
[Major blessing of the Abyss ****]
Abnormal statuses:
[Statue of the goddess Elinaria]
{Level: 1}
{Description: A shrine to the goddess Elinaria made by her first-ever Champion in a new world.}
{Ablity: Serves as a link to the goddess through which she becomes anchored to the world and can give her blessing while her influence is still weak.}
{Modifier: Well-made shrine (Natural Qi gathering formation), Open dragon vain (Qi gathering efficiency increased by 300%), Made by the first (Gives Aura of Tempering), Aura of Tempering (Removes the requirement of needing any tempering supplies for the body tempering stage)}
[Upgrade: Requires 500 Silver bars, 50 Gold bars, 30 Bags of Concrete, 70 Qi-infused wood]
[Upgrade? Y/N]
[Statue of the goddess Elinaria]
{Level: 2}
{Description: A shrine to the goddess Elinaria made by her first-ever Champion in a new world. There is also an open spot where another deities statue can be placed so that they may be worshiped here.}
{Ablity: Serves as a link to the goddess through which she becomes anchored to the world and can give her blessing while her influence is still weak. In a small radius around the shrine, she is able to exert her authorities.}
{Modifier: Well-made shrine (Natural Qi gathering formation, Gives Aura of Enlightenment), Open dragon vain (Qi gathering efficiency increased by 500%), Made by the first (Gives Aura of Tempering (Enhanced)), Aura of Tempering (Enhanced) (Removes the requirement of needing any tempering supplies for both the body tempering stage and early body cultivation stages), Aura of Enlightenment (Increases comprehension and learning speed by 5%}
[Upgrade: Requires 500 Steel bars, 300 Bags of Concrete, 10 Boxs of Gears]
{Requirements not met}
[Statue of the goddess Elinaria]
{Level: 3}
{Description: A shrine to the goddess Elinaria made by her first-ever Champion in a new world. There are two open spots where statues of other deities can be placed so that they may be worshiped here.}
{Ablity: Serves as a link to the goddess through which she becomes anchored to the world and can give her blessing while her influence is still weak. In a small radius around the shrine, she is able to exert her authorities.}
{Modifier: Well-made shrine (Natural Qi gathering formation, Gives Aura of Enlightenment (Enhanced)), Merged Dragon Vain (Qi gathering efficiency increased by 1000% (At center of shrine), Gives Aura of Refinement), Made by the first (Gives Aura of Tempering (Enhanced 2)), Aura of Tempering (Enhanced 2) (Removes the requirement of needing any tempering supplies for both the body tempering stage and early to middle body cultivation stages), Aura of Enlightenment (Enhanced) (Increases comprehension and learning speed by 10%, a minuscule chance of obtaining Enlightenment), Aura of Refinement (Purrifies the Qi in a cultivators body by 2.5% (Dubled for those below the foundation establishment stage)(Only Activates Once))}
[Max Level: Build a Small Temple nearby to increase the Small Temple's level to three]
Meridian count:
-Human
Total: 252
Cores: 3
Primary: 12
Secondary: 12
Collateral: 225 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15))
-Elf
Same as human.
-Ork
Same as human.
-Dwarf
Same as human.
-Luxuria Demon
Total: 269
Cores: 3
Primary: 13
Secondary: 13
Collateral: 240 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15))
-Dragonoid(Humanoid type)
Same as Luxuria Demon.
-Beast-kin
Varied.
-Cat-kin (Beast-kin Nekomata sub-type)
Total: 280
Cores: 3
Sub-cores: 1
Primary: 13
Secondary: 14
Collateral: 250 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Each tail adds one primary and two secondary meridians.
The sub-core is connected to the lower core and each tail, creating a bridge between the two.
-Fox-kin (Beast-kin and Kitsune sub-type)
Same as Cat-kin.
-Kitsune
Same as Cat-kin.
-Nekomata
Same as Cat-kin.
Sol awakening Meridian count:
Kitsune (one-tail)
Total: 2924
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 13
Primary: 14
Secondary: 250
Collateral: 2643 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (two-tailed)
Total: 3213
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 14
Primary: 16
Secondary: 275
Collateral: 2904 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (three-tailed)
Total: 3502
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 15
Primary: 18
Secondary: 300
Collateral: 3165 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (four-tailed)
Total: 3791
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 16
Primary: 20
Secondary: 325
Collateral: 3426 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (five-tailed)
Total: 4080
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 17
Primary: 22
Secondary: 350
Collateral: 3687 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (six-tailed)
Total: 4369
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 18
Primary: 24
Secondary: 375
Collateral: 3948 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (seven-tailed)
Total: 4658
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 19
Primary: 26
Secondary: 400
Collateral: 4209 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (eight-tailed)
Total: 4947
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 20
Primary: 28
Secondary: 425
Collateral: 4470 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (nine-tailed)
Total: 5236
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 21
Primary: 30
Secondary: 450
Collateral: 4731 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
Kitsune (ten-tailed)
Total: 5525
Cores: 4
Sub-cores: 22
Primary: 32
Secondary: 475
Collateral: 4992 ((Secondary*10)+(Primary*5)+(Cores*15)+(Sub-cores))
World distribution:
The Eastern continent, known as Shard, spans from the north pole to the south pole in a jewel-like shape resembling a shard, thus giving it its name. On this continent, you will find the races known as humans in the center near the western coast, another race known as elves in the north, A third race calling themselves dwarves in the south, and finally, the last race that calls this continent home in the center near the eastern coast called Orcs.
The Northwestern continent known as Europa is shaped like a triangle, with one tip being in the north pole, the eastern tip stretching below the equator, and the western tip being well above the equator. This continent is home to a few races that call themselves the Dragonoid, Bloodborne, and Wolvrine. The dragonoids control the southwestern peak of the continent and are ruled by a race of creatures called Grand Dragons, or as some people call them, Giant Dragons. This race consists of creatures that look like giant lizards with great leathery wings extending off their backs and some of them with large spiked tails. That makes Dragonoids one of the only two races in the world not ruled by a member of their race. The other Race like this is the Wolvrine which controls the north of the continent. They are ruled by a small race of giant hyper-intelligent wolves called Fenrir's. Other than these two, the final race on this continent, called the Bloodborne, controls the southeastern point. Others more commonly know this race as Vampires.
The Southwestern continent known as Bremira is shaped more like a misdrawn rectangle with both of its southern points being close to each other in the south pole. The farthest western tip stretches above the equator, and the farthest eastern tip remains below. This continent is home to many different Races that are all grouped together and called Beast-Kin. This is also one of the most peaceful continents in the world, with only a little chaos starting now because of a strange tiger-kin girl.
Between these three continents off the western coast of Shard is the central island continent called Nekovulpin. This continent lies directly in the middle of the equator. It is also home to some of the two most well-known races called the Nekomata and the Kitsunes. These races are seen on every continent in the world, and none of the other races know why. This is because of a massive war between the two races, which led to this Island Continent turning into a wasteland of ruins, and the survivors need to work together to flee and survive. As of the beginning of this story, this island continent is still abandoned and has not been visited in centuries.
Between the three continents off the eastern coast of Shrad lies two island continents smaller than Nekovulpin named Valhalla and Hel. Unlike the other continents or Nekovulpin, these two continents don't have any connection to the other continents through the poles of the world or advanced enough technology to explore across the sea.
Valhalla lies towards the northern pole of the world and is home to the race that calls itself Valkrians, or, as the rest of the world would call them, Angels.
Hel lies towards the southern pole of the world and is home to a myriad of differing races that call themselves Demons.
Sect Rankings: (Nation, in this case means a Race as a nation and not the different empires and kingdoms within)
- Human Nation:
Top National Sect list:
Names:
gods and goddesses:
(Future) - Valaria "Vale" Lockheart - Domain: Transformation, Technology, Exploration
- Elinaria Sintra(Meaning Bright Star or Sun) Mythos(Meaning Myth) - domain: Progression, Discovery, Foxes - Holy Book: The Ethereal Codices of Progression and Discovery
- Stephanie - domain: Reincarnation, Life, Fertility - Holy Book: The Tome of Nature
- Helcior - domain: Cultivation, Time, Learning - Holy Book: The Chronicles Of The Ascendant
-Haruka Kinami- domain: Blood, War, Honor, (Foxes)
Family:
- Tenariphis Lockheart: Uncle/Emperor
- Raina Lockheart: Mom/Mum
- Elinaria Sintra Mythos (same as above): Mother/Mommy (Funny story this one)
- Yuki Lockheart: First/Head Maid
Xia household:
- Quan Xia: Head of House
- Xuan Yaling: Lady of the House
- Lou Xia: Daughter - Eldest child
- Mo Xia: Son - Youngest child
- Cynthea: Head Maid
- Silica: Trainer
Sect:
Sect Master:
- Xiao Luoyang (Male)
Elders:
She was what most cultivation stories would call a jade beauty with shiny black hair and sapphire blue eyes. She was wearing a modified light purple robe with gold timing on the edges. On the shoulder and back, an embroidered silver representation of a glacier carving the mountains was on display. The only people I saw wearing robes with these colors were the elders in the main hall on the day I entered the Sect.
Outer Sect:
-
Inner Sect:
-
Disciples:
Raina's party:
- Zhuan Jiahao (Male) - Inner Disciple -> Outer Disciple
- Lou Xia (Female) - Inner Disciple -> Core Disciple
- Brynn Riley (Female) - Inner Disciple
Core disciples (Random):
- Sue Smith (Male)
Inner Disciples (Random):
-
Outer Disciples (Random):
-
Immortal Sun Empire:
-Tenariphis Lockheart: Emperor
Robes
outer sect = white
inner sect = light blue
core = deep blue
elder = purple with gold trim
Sect master = white and gold with a sliver moon on the back
personal = (color) with silver trim
Cool sect names I may use in the future
Xuehaigong (Snow + Sea + Palace)
Anyangong (Quiet + Flame + Palace)
Kaimingshangong (Enlightened + Mountain + Palace)
Tianshahui (Sky + Desert + Society)
Zhaimenhui (Narrow + Gate + Society)
Qiuxuehui (Curling + Blood + Society)
Ziduyemen (Purple + Venom + Sect)
Anmenpai (Quiet + Gate + Sect)
Yajiao (Elegant + Cult)
Kuanyuanjiao (Wide + Garden + Cult)
Honghuhui (Red + Lake + Society)
Hongpubang (Red + Waterfall + Gang)
Zuigaogong (Supreme + Palace)
Yaopai (Herb + Sect)
Timeilihui (Exalted + Beauty + Society)
Cool holy book names I may use in the future
The Word Of The Phoenix
The Book Of Divines
The Dawn Codices
The Chronicles Of Flames
The Absolution Tome
The Chronicle Of Teachings
The Blessed Tomes
The Book Of Elements
The Sanctity Scroll
The Books Of Duality
The Book Of Eternity
The Chronicles Of The Curator
The Lustrous Codices
The Sanctified Chronicle
The Testaments Of The Past
The Observance Chronicles
The Seraph Scroll
The Codices Of Desires
The Dominion Codex
The Ethereal Words
I was reading this for a while and while their were minor things here or there having to do with the authority figures abusing their power without any consequences. This would be fine with me if they were portrayed as the "bad guys" or something but they are not.
For example while at the mansion the main character is kidnapped, nearly molested, has their leg broken, and is put through enough pain to knock them unconscious (not to mention nearly killed). So what do the owners of the mansion, who gave the order leading to this, do? They say "I am Luo Xia's father, Quan Xia, and this is my wife, Xuan Yaling. We are both sorry for what happened earlier, as it was a standing order I had given." but not before telling the main character off for not introducing themselves. As a side note in order to make up for her mistake of nearly killing the MC the maid is assigned to her while they are at the mansion. Which seems closer to a veiled threat than actual remorse for what happened. Like saying "you see this person who broke your leg, nearly killed you, and then knocked you unconscious using pain? Yeah they are going to follow you around now.
Raina. While forcefully adopting/imprinting on someone is wrong I at least understand she didn't know what she was doing and is sorry about it. What she doesn't appear to be sorry about is, before the MC had even accepted her as a mother, is forcefully grabbing the MC and combing her tail and petting her, sometimes to the point it felt so good that they couldn't resist. That feels like assault to me and I could see someone argue it as s*xual assault because of how good the MC feels when their tail is pet. It felt like an ongoing gag so I tried to let it go but what really got to me was the curse. Raina cursed the MC so that they would slowly regress back to the age of 10 unknowingly and without their consent. How it is handled is what broke the camel's back for me. Someone else basically tells the MC that they only did it cause they want to spend more time with you so get over yourself. The fact that this works on the MC makes me feel it is closer to emotional manipulation of the MC, using their fear of losing loved ones that the MC learned through their trauma. How easily the MC changes sides makes me feel like they have Stockholm syndrome or something similar.
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Seems theres a few tags missing so I'll suggest a few from the list this site gives for stories similar to this:
Stockholm syndrome, Emotionally weak protagonist, Timid protagonist, Mind break, Manipulative Characters.
Tags make a world of difference and theres quite a few emotional beats that come as unexpected due to the lack of tags and context.
The story for the most part has a similar presence to a particular Luna related novel, but it seems every turn of the way the protagonist is gaslit into a whole range of non-consensual actions, never seeking to correct them, never seeking to meaningfully challenge anyone, even when they supposedly have one of the most powerful people in the area as a backer, they put up with veiled threats, bullying and a whole range of things while people sit around nodding 'it is the way of the world' while the protagonist is being procedurally brainwashed by what equates to captors at this point, they are only missing a slave seal for how screwed in the head it has made them at this point.
There is no evolution of personality or character, tacking on a few new character traits isn't developing how they react to situations, it's telling when the character only has bad reactions to guys doing anything but random women get to pet her constantly with no repercussions after it being established as 'intimate family things' like after setting up a specific structure in the middle of the town and having the mother of a friend pet her after previous negative experiences; resulting in near death, in the physical contact area, lack of respect and otherwise, if she won't stop acting on instincts, why does she stop in these cases constantly.
I know only select few people reading this would be happy if someone groping you suddenly meant you were conditioned to obey everything they demand and being unable to refuse, and in many cases controlled into accepting whatever they put down or suffering mental breaks because you tried to refuse due to conditioning. Sounds like a whole load of dread if 'instinct' starts controlling every aspect of your personality, to the point of the main character having little to no agency against those 'instincts'.
The dynamics aren't sufficiently challenged or handled, resulting in a quick apology and then back to the same thing, at no point does anyone bother to ask about boundaries even after crossing the line to the point of someone nearly dying, you would think people would even be slightly aware after a major screw up, to listen to a persons needs, especially one who might not even be the same race, the few times it even gets mentioned when the MC manages to mutter it under their breath, they are quickly ignored but then the MC is happy to challenge completely useless tasks and events.
I really tried, enough to read the entire thing over the course of the last few hours, up to the most recent chapter, but I honestly can't see anything changing, even after a supposed situation to 'get their comeuppance' the main character replies with something equal to 'I know I had a mental breakdown requiring multiple gods to patch up my soul, but it obviously didn't massively affect me, so it's in the past now'.
There is no attempt at character growth, the only 'evolution' is the system evolving how many tails she has. There is no lasting impact of any of the events, even after a severe mental break, there is no struggle after a chapter or two of things being 'wrong', misunderstandings if there are any, last at best two chapters, which might seem great but start feeling lackluster as it keeps happening.
I wish the author well, they have good potential in the story, but I don't think the way they have decided to show it, is for me.
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Honestly had high hopes for this story, its a good concept and the first couple chapters were promising but I just can't read it anymore. I had hopes that the main character would eventually get some backbone or people around them would realise how messed up their actions were but they just keep violating her rights over and over, she has been molested, attacked, victim blamed, mentally and emotionally manipulated both by conversation and "racial instincts" and some of the things done to her by her "mother" were described by the author themself as something a kitsune would give the death penalty for.
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I don't need to add anything here as the other 3 reviews describe this novel perfectly.
I loved the start and the idea of the industrial revolution in a cultivation world, but the 'mother'. Abuse the MC Handel's, just makes me beyond uncomfortable.
Just read the other reviews before you decide to read this novel. But personally? I wouldn't recommend this one anyone.....
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