Year 20XX.
Technology had advanced and Virtual Reality sufficiently developed and become the new mainstream of online games. Now every MMO games uses VR technology, rendering 3D MMO extinct.
Our Loli, Yasaka Ruri (18) was one of the players from a VRMMO game called Ascension.
But, for some unknown reason, she was able to bring out items from the game to the reality.
Now, what will our Loli do?
This story is only posted to ScribbleHub and my blog (https://flyingpiratecat.blogspot.com).
If you see it anywhere else, then it is stolen.
There's Something Wrong With This Girl.
This girl is already eighteen and somehow doesn't understand empathy. Like, there's zero remorse anywhere and she has no friends (like some people think that's she's their friend, but she returns kindness with sh*t).
Like, the story starts with her robbing her own guild, setting back weeks of her teammates efforts (one is earning money to care for his sick sister ffs) ; and why does she do this? F**k if I know. The three levels of experience and 1000 Glory Points just don't seem like a good enough reason imo - whatever gold she earns doesn't even matter, she already had more than she'll ever need from clearing another guild's treasury.
I love the world, but it's wasted on the MC.
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Don’t need to say much. Went through the whole story within a day and enjoyed it. Placed a smile on my face.
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I rate based on how much fun I have reading a story.
The main character makes decisions that I disagree with but that's part of the fun of reading someone else's story.
The author makes good use of the spoiler tag to hide game info boxes. This would be great if I wasn't the type to read every blue box. Even so, needing just 1 click to read the blue box isn't going to make my finger fall off.
The blue boxes aren't just blue. They are presented to look as the game interface would with colors and tool tips. That's a bit more effort than I have come to expect in stories.
Speaking of extra effort, there are images and mobile gifs in the chapters. Personally, they don't do anything for me but other people like them and they don't detract for me.
I enjoy the small cultural nuances that pervade the story since I didn't grow up in Japan.
I do suggest that if the author looks to publishing this story through KU or any other US publisher, is that the author get a native English speaking editor. There are a few pluralization errors and some word choices that are awkward. This might bother someone who is a card carrying member of the grammar police but doesn't bother me and it is far better than many other foreign authored stories that I have enjoyed.
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I enjoyed the story sofar, I wonder what antics the MC gets upto in the future.
Suprisingly I enjoy the irl stuff the most. I hope there will be more worldbuiling in this area aswel.
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At first I was very hesitant to start reading the story beacuse of large amount of system logs in the novel, but when I did so, I couldn't stop and I am actually waiting for future chapters. Many system logs are in spoilers so it doesn't take a much time at all to skip them if one wishes to and extra info about certain skills/system things can be found if clicked the right word. Even without system logs chapters are long plot-like enough and it's obvious that the author tries his best to give us the best reading experience. There is a lot of info about stats, skills and items, but the most important things that you should (at the moment of reading them) know aren't in spoiler. All hail overpowered eternal ninja-archwizard blacksmith loli!
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I thought that this was just "random generic vrmmo", but it actually surprised me how good this was (compared to some other vrmmo stories). It's by no means the best story, but the use of spoilers as menu screens and the occasional gif made the experience a lot better. The grammar is pretty on-point, with only a few minor mistakes that you won't easily catch if you are only passively reading. If you are the type of person to read Dante's Inferno for enjoyment, you might not like this, but if you are a fan of lolis and decently written stories about the exact same thing but with a small formula break, this is the story for you.
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