There are sections where you learn about Spark's past that will pull at the heart strings and the way her cousins support her is extremely well done. The weapons are extremely unique and the ideas flow very well with some unexpected turns you will not see coming despite the stories name. I enjoyed the addition of the magic girls but it's at that point the pronouns come in and that made the story extremely hard for me to follow and it drove my understanding of English writing insane (I suck at writing). Still it's a great story and I'm sure others will love it and can easily get past what I cannot and I'm hoping this gets even more people to read the story. 

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