Quite enjoyable, the novel got potential. I would love to see the MC get a steady character development, not staying in the limbo of stupidity as "young master" stereotype, following a darker approach for the character would fit it better.
Maybe setting some hurdles to mess up MC mindset would work just fine.
All in all, I recommend giving this novel a try, and good luck to the author in not giving up writing even if is just a hobby.
Quite enjoyable, the novel got potential. I would love to see the MC get a steady character development, not staying in the limbo of stupidity as "young master" stereotype, following a darker approach for the character would fit it better.
Maybe setting some hurdles to mess up MC mindset would work just fine.
All in all, I recommend giving this novel a try, and good luck to the author in not giving up writing even if is just a hobby.
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