By FieryKathy
Thanks to a birthday gift from her loving sister, this trans girl is set on an adventure of self-discovery, exploration and love! The story may or may not include catgirls, deities and Full-dive VRMMO’s. :p I am bad at writing story descript
Truly, amazing novel so far. I am honestly suprised. Writing isn't bad and the story of Yuna and Faye made me cry twice!
I can't wait for new chapters.
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TLDR: It's not very good slavery / torture porn. My guess even if you're into that it's at best a 4 if not it's a negative number
Writing : 3/5 The words are correct and the flow is OK, but there's no charm or hook. Flat is the adjective that comes to mind
Plot: 1/5 REPEAT: MC does something stupid without thinking about it and bad things happen to him ; UNTIL (DONE READING) ; There's your plot
Characters: 2/5 The MC is pathetic and whiny, the rest are generic. I Was surprised, there wasn't one of the villains twisting their waxed mustache while foreclosing on orphanage run by nuns who had taken a vow of Poverty
World Building: 2/5 Well it's got magical slavery. It's something of an immersion breaker for me. I just don't see how that manages to have any kind of functional society
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It's good, that's all I can say for the people who like having the MC experience pain often. Not in every chapter but it's there, though kind of sad that the story went to hiatus, cause the author is somewhat "dead" in this website.
Honestly if he/she came back and updated the story, I'll be here all day binging it.
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