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The story is pretty good but seems to be in indefinite haitus but is interesting. the main character is not a bis*xual turned into a women's body (starting to get old and seemingly more trans than bi and more lesbian but most seem to not connect the dots) or futanari (which is basically a women with a d*ck but They're still a women? Confusing?) but is a dungeon which means they're endless possibilities of gender identity and s*xual identity and it seems that most of these kinda of stories are all yuri and lesbian and the men are just not the focus in love? And are just s*xual and leftovers. Which is confusing are they bi or bi-curious or are they trans and lesbian but just a tiny bi or pan. Maybe there's a label for that. Arghh! So confusing. is this a Bi spectrum thing? Well I'm ranting and this story made me question a lot... wish everyone makes it clear how bi their characters are like from 1/10 jk. Edit: maybe bi-gender and pan-gender or somewhere close to pan but more attraction to women and more gender fluid. Or just always questioning? And even on the non-binery spectrum???
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Honestly, a pretty good start. It could definitely use an editor or two, but overall the grammar is pretty good. The story starts off slow, we’ll have to see how it develops. I can’t wait to see what this author does!
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