The story overuses internal monologue to explain exactly what the characters are thinking and feeling, often multiple times within a single paragraph. While some telling is fine, this much explanation slows the pacing and makes the emotions feel forced rather than natural. More dialogue and subtle actions would help bring the characters to life and make their thoughts feel more organic and the damage mechanic is ass I hate it 

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It's a good story for the genre 

Kinda glancing at the synopsis about world hopping, nah. It's dat fighting for your life in fictional world for yourself and get more power 

It's nice the MC have growth, and an actual friendship. 

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Had a bit off a rough start but man from chapter 30 onwards this story is just fire! 

MC is funny as hell and not 

MC is a typical loser at the start, I connect with him somewhat apart from his extreme issues.

MC is also prone to getting manipulated by women at the start of the story but he quickly grows up and by arc 2 I really enjoy this character.

The side characters are not just 2D ants but somewhat fleshed out. The story combines different Worlds, the real world and a giant Fantasy Realm. It's fun to constantly travel between these worlds.

I like the system and even after nearly 50 chapters the stats are still low and kept in check. It feels like MC has to earn every single small thing. He is not OP unlike other protagonists.

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This story started off pretty generic but improved drastically.

The first arc was a bit boring, the chapters a bit short but it was kinda interesting. Starting from chapter 26 the story takes a great turn. The main character has interesting skills, nothing generic but a skill based off conjuration. His ability is somewhat like a Nen abilities where he steals the abilities of others like Chrollo from HXH.

I am interested in what happens if the main character fights against Chrollo at some point. That would be a cool fight. Overall this is a great story.

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This fanfic is a very good and well thought out story. The way it combines original plots with plots from other works is masterfully done. And has very good consistency and grammar. All of that combined with the daily uploads has put this story close to the top of my ratings.

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Interesting story so far, good grammar, characters are well written, and so far the plot has been great.

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I just registered for this story. My English is not very good sry for this. I like this kind of story the most but please autor focus more on games. My fav game is Mass Effect! I need more good Mass Effect Stories. Please make a Noveria or Ferros mission and also make the MC visit the Citadel!!! Can you also include Liara Miranda and Fem Shepard?

The rest of the story is quite good. I liked ff9 when I played it years ago. Funny game good job.

Please keep up the good work! I will keep reading this story I hope you do not disappoint us by dropping it!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!! THIS HAS POTENTIAL

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It is a fun read I am enjoying the new take on fantasy world the MC isn’t just a weird side character that is following the original plot of the manga/books so you get to have an original take on well loved stories.

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A great novel with great potential to be one of the best novels I've ever read

With excellent grammar and well-written characters and with elements of The Ultimate Evolution, this is off to a good start.

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Great novel so far, even if a bit cliche in concept, it's a very well written novel with interesting characters and the action could not be better, I recomend  ;)

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