I read and very much enjoyed "A Reincarnated Demon's Tales of Wonder." The original version that this one is a re-write of.

I have no idea why the writer felt the need to reboot the series, but I at the time I felt it was their right and hoped for an improvement to the already high quality. I was sorely disappointed. Instead, it's just a sloppily rushed story full of one info dump after another and it lacks all the mystery and slow discovery that made the original so good.

It was a mistake on the author's part to think this series needed a re-write. This version has just been a huge drop in terms of the quality of the writing. The writer's impatience and desire to get past the early parts of the story just drip from every sentence, and it harms the quality of the writing at every step. If the author couldn't show the restraint to slow down and do it right, they should have never decided to re-write the story.

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I wish I could rate this higher. Unfortunately the rewrite feels incredibly rushed AND I don't like any of the changes. At this point they might as well be entirely different stories as well...

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I read both stories and they were both good, this however is the better one in my opinion the first half of arc 1 is a little rushed however the story after that has a consistently good pace whereas in the first the story seemed quite rough around the edges and sometimes pointlessly drawn out. Once it catches up the the original in length I think this story will have well exceeded the others quality I just wish the author decided to rewrite it sooner rather than let us get attached to the first just to rewrite it and change major plot points.

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