-The arcs start to get repetitive, often with the introduction of a ML who is rapidly infatuated or intrigued with the FL, it's basically "You've got my interest woman" but with a different flavor.

-The FL is often indirectly reliant on the ML, even though she is supposed to be somewhat self-sufficient.

-We don't really get a functioning catharsis for the arcs, we're introduced to characters who are cruel and abusive, but the arcs conclude without telling us the fates or consequences these characters face. It really starts to feel like our FL is meant to serve as a cosmic punching bag.

-Overall, the novel has a good foundation, but the FL and arcs need to be fleshed out more, it feels a lot like a script rather than an organic setting.

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RoundCardboardBox

Status: completed

Oct 31, 2022

I really enjoyed this story and would highly recommend you check it out for yourself. The protagonist doesn't feel like a complete idiot like many from other series I've read before and the plot as well as the other characters are also enjoyable. If you are still on the fence then I really suggest reading the first chapter and if you enjoy it as well, then keep on reading since most of the story keeps that same quality if not more.

The only complaint I have is this one moment near the middle of the story

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She's in a cave of a big lizard and h returns trapping her inside but instead of hiding till it leaves again or some other plan she arbitrarily decides she could probably run faster than it (which she can't) and just sprints past it, almost dying. She only survives due to getting saved by another character so it all turned out well in the end

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I just didn't like that scene since it felt kinda out of character and pointlessly reckless but other than that and a few other negligible issues this story is great and deserves way more exposure than it has and I hope this review helps with that

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