Very creative premise. I loved how the words flow, simply making my brain churn out an intriguing image of what is happening. As I dwelled deeper into the words and world of the character, I could feel a nice build of tension and thrill. It feels I'm prowling and bathing in the details, and in the end of the chapter. Boom! So that was what happened. Anyway, my only regret is that its a bit slow-paced for me (personal bias so ignore me). If you like a nice change of pace from generic isekai and lit-RPG. This will definitely be a nice read for you. 

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It's an an office story - where the job is to play God and chose the next life for souls.

The premise of the story is interesting, Malarie is in charge of choosing the next life for dead souls. While corruptions has taken hold and most employees like to make the reincarnations fun for their bosses, Malarie just wants to give them a good new life and works hard for it. Fighting the system and facing the wrath of her boss. 

It's written in the first person and we see the world through the eyes of Malarie as she explores the world. As far as grammar goes, I didn't see anything flaws that interrupted the flow of reading, so kudos on that.

The massive flaw I found is that it is essentially just another day in the office albeit a strange office that handles reincarnation. The job is repetitive with the usual side-charaters of bitchy office mates and the good at heart asshole co-worker that's just a bitch to keep the job.

Don't get me wrong, the characters are flushed out and we see each character with a different personality, but the repetition of the work made me skip a lot of the text.

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I like the description of the story but I can't get the big picture of the story. This story is a slow-paced with a vivid description but I have my complaints

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