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Great start looking forward to the rest of the story.
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One might think second chances at least let you enjoy yourself at least. Now I know that it just started but I must say if you can flesh out a side character in single page better then the main character we have a problem. Might I add mildly annoying companions to the list as well as a helper that only has one propose that is not makes things worst. Soothing voice, as if yelling at someone to stop would work but instead only make it worse but more to the point the best character so far is another side character
that poisoned the MC
but you still do your best and it just starting to blossom
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