The Setting is original and poorly explained, I didn't know the technology level of the world until c7 and to make it worse the setting conflicts by character backstory (One is a war ridden land, two is a fantasy mage academy, and the MC's is a modern school setting with hidden demons only he can see while all other humans are ignorant.) So reading it with nothing explained and jumping between settings is jarring.
The characters are good but the Author obviously has favourites and has stated such. This shows when the story bends over backwards to accommodate them, which can work but the author seems to only like the villains of the story.
The plot threads are being created quicker than they progress so either this will be a good long story or they will be left open or rushed.
Now the Story is good even with these faults, actually these faults are only this noticeable because the story is very good and you can see how much better it could be with a revision to fix these problems.
“Welcome Traveler.”
It was what Soren first heard when he met an impossibly strange man in a horrendously strange world, where fantasy became reality. Now, stranded in the unknown world, Soren must make use of the discovery that
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A child traumatized at a young age. An emotionally dead teen now. A youth who has no future, always aiming for mediocrity to stay in the shadows. Entering high school, the child discovers the power that laid within and is dragged into the world no
Year 20XX.
Technology had advanced and Virtual Reality sufficiently developed and become the new mainstream of online games. Now every MMO games uses VR technology, rendering 3D MMO extinct.
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Dungeon: A place full of monsters, traps, treasure, and death. Those are the Great Dungeons, with unplumbed depths below the roots of the mountains.
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Dungeon:
The Setting is original and poorly explained, I didn't know the technology level of the world until c7 and to make it worse the setting conflicts by character backstory (One is a war ridden land, two is a fantasy mage academy, and the MC's is a modern school setting with hidden demons only he can see while all other humans are ignorant.) So reading it with nothing explained and jumping between settings is jarring.
The characters are good but the Author obviously has favourites and has stated such. This shows when the story bends over backwards to accommodate them, which can work but the author seems to only like the villains of the story.
The plot threads are being created quicker than they progress so either this will be a good long story or they will be left open or rushed.
Now the Story is good even with these faults, actually these faults are only this noticeable because the story is very good and you can see how much better it could be with a revision to fix these problems.
Setting 1/5
Story 4.5/5
Characters 4/5
Enjoyment 3/5
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