Absolutely amazing, love the work and can’t wait to read what you’ve been cooking up. Thanks for the chapters and the unique story.

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Awesome story, really weird he hasn't been confronted yet for his TP shenanigans, but whatever. Really hope Sasuke won't follow his original defection route

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A surprising well mix of the two different worlds, with good balance between the story elements and very exciting character development.

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You should read this story. A well paced, character driven, well written story is... Incredibly rare in fanfiction. A fantastically thoughtful merging of two fictions is also really rare. This story hits this spot you didn't know was itching. It is genuinely my favorite story on the Internet at this moment. Also the update speed is incredible. Just read it.

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Book is still awesome 10/10 still recommend

C71

I'm thoroughly impressed with this book 10/10 do recommend

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The character interactions are well thought out, the world-building is interesting, and even the Souls world is incredibly well done. I absolutely loved what you did with the NPCs.

The only reason that frustrated me-not because they were bad, but just due to my personal taste. I personally prefer a protagonist who's more intelligent and doesn't take much nonsense (basically: near-perfect). It's a bit of a childish preference, but that's just how it is for me.

Seeing how Naruto interacts, how the other ninjas act around him, and his lack of sharpness when it comes to figuring out certain important things he's overlooking really frustrates me! But that's not nearly enough to make me dislike the story. In fact, it's actually a great thing-it shows how well the author has given Naruto a consistent and solid personality instead of making him bounce between "perfect" and "idiot" like many fanfics tend to do.

My only concern is the future of the story. Personally, I'd find it ridiculous if, later on, ninja world characters became as strong as Naruto or somehow ended up in the Dark Souls world (for example, Naruto bringing them there). I really hope that doesn't happen. BUT, even if it does, I definitely won't drop this story.

The author has proven to be highly capable at writing and developing the plot, and when they do something questionable, they provide solid reasoning behind it. So, I'll always give the benefit of the doubt and see where things go next.

Excellent work-keep it up~!

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At first I was interested, but after the death flags was placed, I was sad for 

Start of the story: 9/10

Continuing storyline: downhill/10

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