The world is a Dungeon. The Dungeon Core shattered long years ago in an event called the Splintering. The shards of the Core scattered across the world. The large ones formed mini Dungeons of their own. The smaller ones turned into Skill Shards.
The inhabitants of the world can fuse with Skill Shards to get skills. The shards can fuse into myriad Dungeons and mages at the pinnacle of magic have their own personal Dungeons. They are the Dungeon Mages.
Our MC travels back in time from the future and uses his knowledge to free humanity from the oppression of the other races.
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This is Probably one of the best novels in this website. It has an amazing build up so far, and the story has kept me hooked, I just want to keep reading but alas there are only 22 ch so far. The only thing I would want more of is there to be alot of unexpected twists and turns as the story progresses.
Story: 10/10 (Lots of potential)
Character: 10/10 (unique characters)
Grammar: 10/10 (found nothing that would impede my reading)
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I'm enjoying my time with this. It's going a bit too slow for my tastes, with not enough being revealed to make it that much with it, but I'm a sucker for those huge paperweights so that's probably just me. The story is shaping up to be interesting, a huge divergence managed to happen far sooner than I thought it would and the MC isn't an all-knowing figure. He's a guy who got pretty far in his last life and wants to do even better this time. All in all, I'm enjoying it.
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This is a great story! Humans aren’t at the top but the bottom, Orcs aren’t stupic but still greedy and evil, Magic isn’t really magic but skills/powers/cultivation (?) like while still being magic and dungeons are built in a completelly inovative manner!
Love it!
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The story appears to be well fleshed out and I appreciate the author taking his time to develop the world for what is to come. That said it means that if the pace doesn't appear to pick up this story will be critiqued again. One thing to appreciate is the developments with the time travel that the author does as he shows that the MC does not know everything that happened and that he has altered the future. Now saying this I am looking forward to some interactions with altered future events and possibly meeting characters the MC met earlier in life much later and later in life much earlier. The pace and content creates much anticipation for what is to come but what remains to be seen is consistency in info used and upload speed. Will review later when I see how the story has developed.
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Very good story, just wish there would be more frequent updates.
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Well story is pretty good so far just that story seem to have progressed too fast and I suggest continue writing.
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