This is a rehash fic. Not only is it a rehash fic but it bends over backwards to have the MC just stand around and contribute nothing to the story. Reading the MC either doing nothing or actively being incompetent so the story stays the same is frustrating. The MC is a SI as Peroroncino and immediately forgets his cannon knowledge as soon as he enters the new world. I wouldn't care if the MC changed the overarching plot if we didn't just get a worse version of the original story as consequence. The brief instances of the MC not just standing around watching and actually doing things was interesting even if I know it won't change the story as a whole. This story has so much potential even if you want Ainz's plots to remain the same you shouldn't have to force the reader to read through it. There is so much stuff Peroroncino could be doing that isn't just watching Ainz. His Human class would be a good arc in and of itself why not write about his adventures as he levels? Getting to see him grow a class would be at the very least new. He has a staff that lets him just edit the status of anyone below level 40 so he could potentially not only grant himself any class but grant nearly any character he meets great potential, but All we get instead is the MC fallowing Momon around at level 3 while being carried by an oc character in his party (a random maid from Nazarick) while cannon just rehashes in front of our eyes.
When Roger, an ordinary man with an extraordinary heart, is suddenly reincarnated into the body of Homelander, the world’s most powerful and controversial hero, he faces an unimaginable challenge. Now endowed with not only Homelander’s
This is a rehash fic. Not only is it a rehash fic but it bends over backwards to have the MC just stand around and contribute nothing to the story. Reading the MC either doing nothing or actively being incompetent so the story stays the same is frustrating. The MC is a SI as Peroroncino and immediately forgets his cannon knowledge as soon as he enters the new world. I wouldn't care if the MC changed the overarching plot if we didn't just get a worse version of the original story as consequence. The brief instances of the MC not just standing around watching and actually doing things was interesting even if I know it won't change the story as a whole. This story has so much potential even if you want Ainz's plots to remain the same you shouldn't have to force the reader to read through it. There is so much stuff Peroroncino could be doing that isn't just watching Ainz. His Human class would be a good arc in and of itself why not write about his adventures as he levels? Getting to see him grow a class would be at the very least new. He has a staff that lets him just edit the status of anyone below level 40 so he could potentially not only grant himself any class but grant nearly any character he meets great potential, but All we get instead is the MC fallowing Momon around at level 3 while being carried by an oc character in his party (a random maid from Nazarick) while cannon just rehashes in front of our eyes.
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