He was a normal man, struggling to survive in midst the catastrophe, when dungeons appeared in the world.
When the militaries failed, and governments broke down, he set out to destroy the dungeons, to survive.
But it costed him everything. His friends. His brother. His lover.
At the end he was left alone, fighting against the last evil.
He burned his whole life, and the whole world, in the memory of his loved one, turning into ashes himself.
But the true flame couldn't die - like the pheonix he rose from his ashes.
The death is only the beginning of a new life.
Hello dear Readers,
I'm new at writing and would like it if you could write some comments.
I hope you find my novel interesting!
And without further escalation, thanks for reading!
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This novel is very easy to read, allowing one to kick back and relax. Most of the issues I managed to spot were small ones, such as 'hanging AT that axe of yours', 'There was no sign (s) that he had any sense of humor' and ' further up ahead should be THE group', or ones like ' Little did I know that this should be the last time I saw him', where 'should' should be 'would' or 'could'. As I said, small error, not worth mentioning. But then, there are times in prologue where tenses are not places correctly: 'Ahhh! I know, this f**ker ignores me!' or 'My last food has been some kind of humanoid tiger'. These do detract from the story, making them my biggest problem with this novel. However, these are all the issues I have. I dare say that with an editor, this story can easily become one of the best in the site, iif the quality seen in the prologue also continues all the way. 4.5/5
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