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This novel is very easy to read, allowing one to kick back and relax. Most of the issues I managed to spot were small ones, such as 'hanging AT that axe of yours', 'There was no sign (s) that he had any sense of humor' and ' further up ahead should be THE group', or ones like ' Little did I know that this should be the last time I saw him', where 'should' should be 'would' or 'could'. As I said, small error, not worth mentioning. But then, there are times in prologue where tenses are not places correctly: 'Ahhh! I know, this f**ker ignores me!' or 'My last food has been some kind of humanoid tiger'. These do detract from the story, making them my biggest problem with this novel. However, these are all the issues I have. I dare say that with an editor, this story can easily become one of the best in the site, iif the quality seen in the prologue also continues all the way. 4.5/5
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