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[Using the translator]
I'm loving it so far, the only complaint is just that Mc's personality seems to change in the first 13 Caps, but nothing that an edition solves...
From Cap 14 onwards, will you use memory loss as his as a means of building a personality?
And please, if he's going to use a weapon, let it be a spear the main weapon. It's always the sword that MCs use.
Continue with the story, it has good potential.
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It has a good plot and has still potential for more. Will strongly recommend to read and give it a try
Just need to upload fast
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