Alastair Carter is a 27-year-old marketing and management teacher like many others around the world. Well... maybe besides the fact that he teaches some of that world's prodigies, but it's just a small detail. Even though he loves fantasy novels, he has never expected getting sucked into a fantasy world himself. I mean, who does?
Follow Alastair and find out how he will deal with this predicament. Will he be nominated as a hero? Will he save the world in crisis or focus on looking for a way back to Earth? Or perhaps, will he settle down and live peacefully? This is the beginning of a great tale...
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Full-sized cover can be found in the glossary.
Chapter Ero-meter:
❤ - A bit of explicit content
❤❤ - Around half a chapter of lewds
❤❤❤ - WAIT?! IT'S ALL F***ING LEWDS?!
Main release day:
Monday.
What to expect:
Some light management, a status system in the background, wholesome lewding centered around the MC, a slice of life story with some adventuring and lots of lovely monster girls.
What NOT to expect:
Depictions of rape, mindbreak or abusive mind control, heavy sexual abuse, NTR and other heavy stuff.
The title is not a "bait", but please don't expect fully devoted "hot" chapters every other release. It all depends on the flow of the story (which is still a Slice of Life) and might come to a moment where stuff may happen often, but not all the time.
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So, a 2-star rating - must mean it's bad right? Surprisingly both yes and no.
It is "properly written" as in the text flows well and the grammar is good.
The system is quite tailored, but not really playing a role in the story - It lies unused until it needs to appear. There's barely any fighting, as it's not really an action novel - which is fine, especially since there are no random annoying bonus thugs introduced for no reason. Fights just happen when a problem needs to be solved.
No, the problem which makes this a 2-star goes deeper. The stupid way this is written from start to finish.
Let's just put a few of the following points into perspective:
Another world > s*xmancer (power from lewding girls) > Make a brothel? > Make your harem work in brothel?
Ok, that's weird and won't really work, next:
ALL demi-humans are subhuman slaves and monsters > Let's make a monster harem > Let's make a monster brothel > Let's buy slaves > Let's feel bad about them being slaves > Let's have the girls fall in love with MC for... quite bland reasons? > Let's give the MC pseudo-mind-control powers and let him be OVERLY self-conscious about it > Let's say "I don't deserve you" every chapter.
Ok, there are about 10 things wrong there, so let's unwrap. Why have non-humans be subhuman trash in society when you're gonna have a 90% non-human harem and "brothel staff"? It might sound "convincing for the plot", but it's really just useless and serves no purpose.
Why have them all be slaves or worse and have MC buy them or save them if he's going to act as he does after the fact? In fact, he SHOULD act like that as what he's doing is just as bad as what he thinks it is. He's literally buying slaves and grabbing poor people off the street, feeding them, and having s*x with them, in that order.
There's also serious confusion up to this point what the point of some stuff is. The system is probably going to be useless due to low action, which makes it mostly pointless. "Romance-Harem-Pornnovel" doesn't really mix. choose 2 out of 3, but never all of them, It's like water and oil, they look quite similar, but they're totally not the same, and any interaction between them gets awkward real fast.
Why even add the "suggestive mind control" into the story if the main character is going to be a bit*h about it? It just falls into the "nono" category of stuff you should avoid in literally any and every novel type.
Basically what I mean to say is this: You created a story where the MC is self-conscious about his every action, feeling that he's useless trash that no one can like while EVERYONE loves him. Every girl in the story is considered to be subhuman trash, either a slave, a thief, about to be executed or in a similarly sh*tty situation before the MC "Heroically comes to the rescue", charms them up, s*xes them, and then feels self-conscious about having s*xed someone who struggled to eat bread 2 days earlier.
Did that make sense to anyone? Well, I hope it didn't.
What I think you should've done: Have the MC explore the world a bit from the start. Find his harem members through journey instead of search and perhaps split the brothel and the harem into 2 categories. Make the society a mix of races rather than human superiority. Written the relationship parts in a more lighthearted/comedic way just like you did with the king.
The reason it's not a good novel even though it could easily qualify for one is that you built it on a house of cards. Every ground pillar of the story is so fragile that you have to balance all the aspects you want in the story, such as Brothel/System/Relationship/Morals/Story progression on a tightrope when in reality you should've never included some of them from the start.
The main quirk of this should be the brothel, but how is this going to function in 50+ more chapters? Is he just going to buy more slaves, s*x them, and put them to work like it's normal? I think the brothel part of this story is where the main problem is. It's impossible to write, weird to read and there's no long future to it. TL;DR: It's got a good flow to it and is well-paced, everything else is just built to collapse due to the world it's written in and how the main premise completely clashes with the genres of the novel.
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While a general rule I’ve set for myself has been to read at least 10 chapters, I feel I have enough info to form an opinion. If anything, I’ll come back and update my review at a later date if I feel it’s necessary
I can easily say I’ll continue reading. The author has an interesting take on the isekai genre and has decided to take their time building their world with the first bunch of chapters. I look forward to what the author will be putting out for their story. My only issue with the story is that it feels a bit like wish fulfillment/a self-insert MC. I’m not criticizing the author for this, just pointing out that that’s one of my biggest takeaways so far.
My main qualms with the story have more to do with the technical side of things. Some awkward sentences, tense change problems, and possibly a lack of editing passes before posting chapters have left some typos and misused words behind. These are all fixable and a natural part of any authors growth in the craft.
I will also point out for the author, be wary of how your describe your characters, both male and female. I can see that giving in depth descriptions will be necessary for the future of the story, but being mindful doesn’t ever hurt anyone. Make your characters actual people, regardless of gender or how they identify, and your story will be enriched for it.
Also, I hope you kill Kamil down the line. But that’s the grim dark fan in me. Lol.
You’re doing something right so far. Keep doing it and your story will be fine.
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Hello author, the story has followed a very interesting pace I hope great adventures.
The only sadness is the low frequency of releases, other than that it has been a lot of fun so far.
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I hate MCs who are too saintly and share too much affection towards random people. A wife with commitment SHOULD be treated with more compassion than a random women who are just lusting without commitment. MC even had séx with random women without thinking about the opinion of his wife who had devoted her loyalty to him. In my opinion, this is very unfair to the wives side because they don't get more treatment than random girls who are lustful even though they dedicate their bodies & hearts to the MC. BECAUSE MC IS TREATED EVERYONE THE SAME.
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MC is bland. Super nice, super considerate, never willing to bend someone over a desk and have his way with them without having a detailed Q&A about what *they* want to do, even when he knows what their personality is. It's a little weird considering how much he's able to let go when killing enemies. Pushing people outside of their comfort zone can be a good way to help them, (or better, hinder them once in a great while, leading to reflection, consideration and a resolution that leads to a deeper, more meaningful relationship.)
It would be a better story if the MC got lost in his powers a bit before getting set back on the right track (by a certain someone I won't name, because it would give too much away.) Or he gets lost in revenge or something. There's not enough conflict to drive a sense of tension. Honestly, the longer I keep reading, the lower I want to rate the story.
The dude even cleans up his own juices afterwards. I want to read about someone wobbling out of his room, half conscious and leaving a slimy trail of shame on their way to the bath. Nope, MC magics it away, along with the pain they didn't feel when he takes their first time (with a tiny number of brief exceptions in the latter case.)
One exception to the 'always nice' rule (which really isn't an exception) is when one of the women get especially needy. Once in a great while he will wreck them, but generally only to make an example of them so they don't do it again. Usually, he'll just be like 'No, no, not the time. Got some paperwork to do.' MAJOR BUZZKILL
The cutesy, sugary head pats and pecks on the cheek/lips would be great if they were limited to a few occasions with people who have personalities that fit, but he constantly does the same with almost everyone. It gets diabetic in a bad way. "Oh you did the job I hired you for. Good girl." *pat* *pat* *peck* *blush* *everyone chuckles* *princess carry* "OMG she's adorbs." - Ugh. It was tender and meaningful at first, but by this point in the story it's just tiresome.
In the heart of a heavily racist world, he starts a brothel filled with non-humans and everyone else just--goes along with it. There are a tiny number of problems, but they're always easily resolved, natch. Immediate conflict resolution is rather typical of isekai I guess, but it's still a letdown.
Even if humans were that powerful, other races and tribes losing skilled contributors to human-led slavery would cause a huge commotion. Aside from a little bit of resentment here and there which either immediately gets punished, or else effortlessly smoothed over by the MC, it doesn't feel like there is meaningful animosity between humans and other races.
The s*x could be far more creative, sloppy and lustful. Better than most smut translated from Japanese, but still with the 'coiling' and 'stirring up' on occasion. Not sure if this story is a translation but at times it definitely reads like it.
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I really really really like the story.I'm not good at reviewing something. But this one is good!
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The prologue (ch1-9) is actually quite nice. I didn't even notice the whole thing was just a prologue. Prologue alone i'll rate it 8/10. But after that prologue it goes from 8/10 to 6/10.
Firstly, the descriptions in the story are really a chore to read as they're either too detailed info dumps or completely lacking in detail. Main example is the info and layout of the huge mansion was so long and confusing as it was just dumped in one go without care.. Here's a copy..
The butler opens up the gate and we enter the front yard. A nice, paved path leads us to a small fountain in front of the main entrance. It's made out of white marble and portrays a beautiful woman holding a vase, from which water flows down into the pond.
We glance over the entrance. Two-steps-high round elevation with four pillars upholding a small roof over it. With a half-mahogany half-glass wooden double doors, it reminds you of those high star hotel entrances.
Moving inside we are met with a breathtaking sight. A big lobby hall out of white marble and dark mahogany too. It's quite spacious and two levels high. To the left and right, there are four groups of chairs and sofas with tables, two per side. Definitely as waiting areas.
At half of the hall's length, there's a beautiful reception placed in the middle. A wide desk with lots of small boxes hanging on the short wall behind it, most likely for the room keys. There is a door to its left and right. Just beside each door on the sides, marble stairs are going up halfway, then they turn inwards and join in the middle, above the reception, leading to the visible second level in the other half of this hall. An entrance hall straight out of a rich noble's fantasy mansion.
The second level extends up there to the end of the room. We can only see some furniture and doors from our position. There are walkways with railings on both sides that lead back in the direction of the reception and give access to the second level of the mansion's corridors to the west and east wings. They are exactly above the ones on the bottom level which we are on.
Not gonna lie, this is not a sight I was expecting to see anywhere else than in fiction and the highest class hotels reserved for celebrities. The view down from these walkways must be amazing. And that huge chandelier fits perfectly.
I walk closer to the reception, staring at everything in awe. When I reach it, I can see into the corridors leading to the sides, and man, there are at least twelve doors in my sight and walls turn left, creating those long wings of the mansion we saw from the outside. There must be at least twice as many rooms in those segments. And there's that second level too.
The butler arrives at my side. I pick one of the keys from the reception and we walk to a room in the left corridor. I open it and take a glance inside. It's quite spacious and in the same style as the main hall. A nice double bed, some furniture, a desk with a working area, a table with some chairs. There's a door leading to the room adjacent to this. Interesting idea. If you come with someone, you can have rooms by each other and pick up an additional key in case you want to cross without having to go outside.
We come back to the main hall and go through the doors by the reception. There are many tables with benches and chairs arranged in patterns here. I assume this is some kind of a dining area. We explore the doors that lead out of it and find an entrance to a big kitchen on the left. It looks well equipped and prepared to suffice for serving a lot of people.
Going the other way, we stumble on most likely the cleaning department. There are a lot of various tools and devices here. Also, storage for sheets, tableware and stuff like that. In both places, there are also doors further which lead to a narrow corridor with smaller rooms. Servant quarters if I were to guess. On both of its ends, there are stairs up, but we go back to the main hall and then use those stairs to check the second level.
Up there we see a recreational area half the size of the dining room below. Some more sofas and tables and a small counter to serve alcohol and snacks. It ends up with a set of double doors.
We pass through them and going right we find an indoor bath, split into three sections—male, female and mixed. We enter one and are met with a big pool, areas to clean yourself by the walls and some space to relax outside of the pool. It's naturally empty right now. Everything in the usual mahogany-marble style.
Going left, we find a library with a lot of books. Finally, we reach a similar narrow corridor as the one which is most likely currently under us, on the level below. There are also some rooms here but with much more fancy doors. We check the ones looking the best.
We enter a room that literally screams VIP Penthouse the moment you step in. It's around two times the size of the other room we checked before. There are two big beds, which would easily fit at least five people each. A lot of masterfully crafted furniture with big wardrobes and shelves. There's also a small personal bath and a toilet behind a door. Two work areas, a small personal library and a half-glass door to a balcony. From there, you have a view into a small but charming garden behind the mansion.
The garden has some benches, two small wooden bowers and is surrounded by path-making low hedges. There's also a quite small pond there.
Checking out the other rooms in that corridor, they look similar to the ones on the bottom floor but slightly better equipped. We move back to the main entrance. I sigh and turn to the silent butler.
All these descriptions are basically forgotten the next chapter and wasn't used or followed again, author just use basic words like "bathroom", "kitchen" and "room" without any proper identification of the actual location of the scenario.
Secondly, the newly introduced characters are too shallow, those slimes didn't even settle down yet or even get some proper character depth before they were thrown into f**king with the MC and taking his v-card.
These 60 years old slimes was abused by humans for years/decades yet they've gone from being suspicious of the MC to being affectionate and into f**king with him less than 24hrs of their meeting.
Thirdly, I tried reading ahead skimmimg chaps and I found MC's personality can be very annoying, MC is dense asf as if he is completely unaware of his charm. No hint will get through him unless the girl say "f*ck me" on his face and even if they directly say it MC will refuse (even if he likes the girl) and activate his "nice guy" persona saying "no you deserve better" and girls had to convince the MC to f**k them. This problem still exist after hundreds of chaps. MC is definitely one of the most annoying harem protagonist in my book because he just let women pursue him rather than act himself. MC felt so artificial as if he was coded to act "this way" or "that way" everytime without any changes or character growth.
Anyways. If you want smut you can read this since smut here are pretty nice, just ignore MC's personality and you're good to go.
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this is a good example of what a lewd (not hentai) novel should be.
Chapters are clearly marked out whether or not they contain anything so a reader can choose what to read and revisit things they like.
the lewd chapters are actually good, and has a above 20 IQ main character that knows how to take charge and when to hold back.
the story around the lewd scenes is what keeps the reader invested in the characters and makes them able to look forward to the next time some of them get together.
even if I find myself skipping the lewd scenes most of the time, I do not mind them because they are well written.
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Chewie, we're home...
We have here an outstanding hidden treasure, which I didn't expect to find at all. The overall atmosphere is kind and relaxing, the story is well written, the girls are jewels with different personalities. Highly recommend to read. But if it was not convincing enought, we have to look at it in depth.
Setting - 4/5. We have seen isekai quite a few times already, but it's one of the best ways to carry this story. The world works just fine and it's not exactly hard to understand what is exactly going on after the introduction.
Story - 5/5. One of the best writing styles I've seen so far. It's not about nuclear surgery or rocket science, so the story is easygoing enough to relax. I was hooked by warm and cozy home here, which is the strongest point of this title in my opinion
(actually the M-rated content is the best thing here, I lied)Characters - 4.5/5. Mark my words, these people are alive enough to have unique personalities even if we're talking about the girls of same race. It's actually easy to remember girls with such distinctive features, but there will be several dozens of them later. Be ready for some big harem here. (4/5 instead of 5 actually because there are no particular type of character I wanted to see. I'm really biased 'cuz of this, so
what can you do about datI'm sorry)M-rated content - ho-ho/5. If you are reading this, you are person of culture indeed. We all know that everything wtitten before is irrelevant for people of culture. Be ready for some high-quality demi-human content covered by variety of major things that people like.
Verdict? It's awesome! Take your place in the warm family with breathtaking demi-girls and enjoy yourself. Simple as that.
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Came for the smut, stayed for the plot. More seriously, this is a story with a slow start. He does build a brothel and it takes a while to think on it, work towards it, build it to the beginning of its existence, and nurture it before it's what I would consider to be self-sufficient. This is NOT a story about banging 24/7 and with anything that moves. At it's core this is a story about trying to root out discrimination with the power of s*x, with him becoming a literal s*x god as a side effect. The main character does gain a harem, but it's separated into his wives and his friends with benefits/employees. He starts out cautious about being with multiple girls and in the beginning he does see himself as not worthy, but as the story progresses he become more confident with the morals of his new world and actively tries to be a person worthy of having so many women. Very sweet and loving main cast.
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