Android’s Fantasy Life
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4.7 (10 ratings)
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Synopsis
After the end of the world a household android runs out of power after waiting for the self-destruct protocol after the death of their master. Entering a sleep like state its only regret that it could not save its master as it awaits a new power source.
(I am bad at writing so don't expect much)
Genre
AdventureFantasyGirls LoveLitRPG- A Night of ChatterJul 8, 2020
- More Then Meets The EyeJul 2, 2020
- Calming SensationJun 27, 2020
- A Future of HappinessJun 25, 2020
- The World SystemJun 25, 2020
- A World Filled With LifeJun 24, 2020
- A Strange Dream. A Stranger RealityJun 23, 2020
- Sleeping BeautyJun 23, 2020
- A BeginningJun 23, 2020
- The End?Jun 22, 2020
- Crystal and MasterJun 22, 2020
- Prologue – To Fix a Mistake.Jun 22, 2020
Table of Contents
This story seems like an honest attempt at reincarnation from a wartorn world to fluffy fantasy.
The overarching story elements that I can see are interesting and despite a lot of elements being set up like wish-fulfillment fantasy, there's quite a bit of potential.
Where this story falters is in the details. The spelling and grammar are poor. The author shifts to a stage play / multi POV writing style later, but it's not used effectively.
Some characters feel flat. There's one situation where one character has to go meet a king, and their parent goes "oh well, I guess we can make the king wait so be off now". No mention of honor or surprise in such a scene.
Effectively, it's a good wireframe of a story. Could do with a loooot more polish, but it works.
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