Android’s Fantasy Life
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4.7 (10 ratings)
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| Total Views (Chapters): | 4,618 |
| Average Views: | 385 |
| Word Count: | 12,937 |
| Average Words: | 1,078 |
| Pages: | 48 |
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- Sleeping Beauty (20)
- A Strange Dream. A Stranger Reality (19)
- Crystal and Master (19)
- The End? (19)
- A Future of Happiness (19)
- A Beginning (18)
- Calming Sensation (17)
- A World Filled With Life (17)
- Prologue – To Fix a Mistake. (17)
- More Then Meets The Eye (16)
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- A Night of ChatterJul 8, 2020
- More Then Meets The EyeJul 2, 2020
- Calming SensationJun 27, 2020
- A Future of HappinessJun 25, 2020
- The World SystemJun 25, 2020
- A World Filled With LifeJun 24, 2020
- A Strange Dream. A Stranger RealityJun 23, 2020
- Sleeping BeautyJun 23, 2020
- A BeginningJun 23, 2020
- The End?Jun 22, 2020
- Crystal and MasterJun 22, 2020
- Prologue – To Fix a Mistake.Jun 22, 2020
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This story seems like an honest attempt at reincarnation from a wartorn world to fluffy fantasy.
The overarching story elements that I can see are interesting and despite a lot of elements being set up like wish-fulfillment fantasy, there's quite a bit of potential.
Where this story falters is in the details. The spelling and grammar are poor. The author shifts to a stage play / multi POV writing style later, but it's not used effectively.
Some characters feel flat. There's one situation where one character has to go meet a king, and their parent goes "oh well, I guess we can make the king wait so be off now". No mention of honor or surprise in such a scene.
Effectively, it's a good wireframe of a story. Could do with a loooot more polish, but it works.
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