At the moment of his death, the protagonist awakens in a boundless, white void. There, he is offered a choice: to begin a new life in the brutal world of Lords, where the powerful vie for dominance. However, to gain a talent capable of ensuring his survival, he must make a sacrifice.
He chooses to relinquish his memories of family, the identity of his body, and—out of desperation—his very sight. In exchange, he receives the "Eye of Chaos," a legendary talent that grants him the ability to perceive the unseen, analyze the energy of his enemies, and adapt to any threat.
Reborn in a harsh land teeming with monsters and ruthless Lords, he must not only survive but also build a kingdom of his own. Every step is a fight for resources, every decision a gamble, and every Lord a potential ally—or adversary.
Will he be able to harness his talent to outwit the others? Will the sacrifices he made prove to be worth the price he paid? One thing is certain—in the world of Lords, there is no place for the weak.
Well it seems that like the previous reviwer deleted his own review before I post mine then I am the first?
Now for the review.
1st. It’s great start with an evolving world-building from MC’s viewpoint and that is how it need to be done in using wiser characters to help them learn.
2nd. The actions scene are great for diving into it.
3th. The speech interactions are good for characters developpement and used well.
4th. At this moment the characters known are greatly developped for what I find being a beginning arc.
5th. Sorry I think you to reread your chapters because there is some typos in some of them (between 5th and 20th chapter I think).
So there is it a 4 star review.
And may the chaos ailling in you sens.
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