The story has plenty of potential and a great hook. A bullied loser being forced into a godly contest with a broken system and a humiliating title is inherently compelling. The humor works well, the system is fun, and the world-building has some strong ideas driving it. However, it takes a while for the pacing to pick up. You have to stick through a few chapters before it really gets going. But man does it get going. The author really improved greatly as he went on, the development really picking up and catching my attention. It used to have some grammar errors, but the author fixed them up a while back. In my opinion, some parts spend too much time on explanations, particularly when the system is first introduced. Will I keep reading?Yes, the premise is fun, and Matheus is likable. I do hope he gains more confidence though. But I stuck through Gantz when I was a kid, so I can stick through this. The other factors such as the world building are interesting and free up ideas for mysteries to be explored. If you give it a chance, this story will not disappoint. I think most other readers can enjoy something like this easily, so power through!

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