Starts off a little boring, but once we actually get into the story and past what is basically prologue and exposition it's really good. The author does a good job with portraying the characters from the movies and tv show accurately. Although I dislike some of the directions the author has taken (specifically with Qui-Gon, it felt underwhelming and, in my opinion, it should have been more dramatic and memorable). Grammar and spelling is good. Dialogue is good. I'm looking forward to seeing how the MC will change canon.

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Broldakka

Status: chapter 50

Feb 6, 2021

You simply won't find a better star wars story here. Sure it can be slow and the beginning is rocky as f**k but when you get past that there is no reason not to follow along. The story goes though a lot of the major and minor points from the star wars universe and gives a fantastic spin on it using the classic Isekai story genre. So come down take a look and eat some cake while your at it.

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medoari

Status: chapter 22

Aug 19, 2020

I didn't expect much when starting the story. But I finished the story in one go. It's really one of the best stories I've read these days.

Thank you :)

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Archivist_Kioku

Status: chapter 6

May 13, 2024

It's possible that the story is good, but the writing is so bad that it's hard to tell. Author consistently makes poor sentence structure decisions and punctuation choices, splits paragraphs mid-sentence, and fails to make new paragraphs for new speakers in conversation.

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shadowknight2996

Status: chapter 1

Jan 9, 2023

Really good kinda slow at the beginning and time skips galore but it’s just for waiting things out like collecting metal and resources but really really recommended to have an extra tab to search characters or events to jog your memory cause it’s been awhile since I’ve watched the movies and close wars

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