A title sets the tone, the synopsis a promise. I was expecting p@rn with plot and I got it, until the honeymoon phase was over (around chap 40+) and the story derailed to, vanilla drama, POV-pocalypses, unused powers, and wasted opportunities. I tryed to like it because of the outrageous world setting, till sage mode kicked in. 

You gave MC s3x powers and a literal sugarmama-goddess, and wat does he do with it? Well imagine someone won unlimited amount of money, yet chose to clean the bathroom after his wife and her boyfriend is finish. You alrdy broke the rules of engagement by giving MC powers, yet u still want him to play like a vanilla-beta male.

chapters makes everyone happy, some say chapters correlates to ones bedroom finesse, and seeing how short and unsatisfactory the chapters are, ill let others be the judge of that (I read the ToS. No this is not an attack). I for one am appalled at the chapters length, its 1/3 of a typical chapter, ever heard of quality over quantity? (Again not an attack, a genuine question)

if you have nothing better to read, read till 40ish, then read something else. Time is your greatest asset.

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