The Secret Orders of the world were finally making their move. A young man, drowned in his Sins and Regrets, was now the head of one the major Secret Orders.
This story is about him, the women who surround him, their Sins of Love, and the world itself.
Author's Note: Schedule for July 2020 will depend on the Poll on my Patreon. Let's see if Sins of Love gets any votes for Story of the Month.
I am Impressed!
This looks like a promising story. I want to see where the writer will take it in the future.
This is an early review, and I will try to update it as the story progresses. So, here are the Pros and Cons of the story:
Pros: 1) The Writing! I have read Author's first work, The Cursed Star. The writing in that story reflected that Ace was still trying to figure out his own style, as he experimented with phrases and words that sometimes seemed too much. However, here, he's keeping everything simple and in a flow that fits the tone and nature of the story. I have not found any glaring errors, and there are little to no errors in the chapters I have read. This is Professional level of writing.
2) The Story! I don't know about others, but for me, this story seems to hold a lot of potential. Even though we have only read one chapter from MC's POV, I have gotten a sound idea of what kind of a person he is. And I like it. The whole thing about Secret Organizations piques my Interest. And
The concept of Amazeros has all of my attention. It's intersting.
3) Characterization! Finally an Author who's willing to give proper attention to his Heroines. We can see it in how the Author decided to introduce us to the story from the perspective of a new Heroine instead of the MC's perspective. And as Ace himself stated in his comments on WebNovel and MSB, he will be changing POV's from time to time, though most of the story will be read from MC's perspective, heroines will get their fair share of time. I am really glad about that. It will give more depth to the story.
Cons:
1) Slow release schedule! I would really like it if he uploads at least two chapters a week instead of just one. However, people have their own circumstances, and I don't want him to push himself to write more at the cost of the quality of this story.
2) There are just too many characters introduced in first chapters of the Story. It isn't really a Con, since the author has given us a Glossary to help us remember these characters, but it would have really been hard on readers if there wasn't a character list.
A few spoilers here:
A big Harem! There are already about 20 women in his Harem. You can check the glossary. And there will be more as the story progresses and new Volumes come out.
Incest! WINCEST! Bro x Sis.. Step-Mother x Son.. and Potentially Daughter x Father as well.
Ace is a man of Culture.
In the end, I would like the new readers to keep some things in mind before getting into this story. I have read his other story and this one, I can tell you that he doesn't keep back from writing disturbing content. If you are uncomfortable with Incest or Rape... you need to prepare yourself. The MCs of his stories are OP and Chaotic. Also, you do not need to be worried about NTR. The author has said that he will never write on NTR. He hates it to the core of his being.
Do give this story a try. It may not be for everyone, but the people who are comfortable with the genres and themes he writes on, will surely love this story.
Peace!
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