Alright. I'll start by saying this is interesting, and I plan to keep reading it. However I need to follow it up with the MC and 'spirit' thing that currently make up most of the dialogue, are annoying as hell. It was so frustrating to read I almost gave up. Then comes the second, while almost infinitely better to read, the author is putting too much detail and mystery into the conversations that I just can't be bothered to read most of it. When I get to a big paragraph, I'll read the first two or three sentences then move on. I think it it were toned down, it would be much more enjoyable to the point it doesn't feel like a chore to read. I really like the way the author is going about with the system, it feels fresh for something we're used to seeing over and over again. So, author, I look forward to seeing what you have in store. Good luck!

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